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Array ( [sid] => 138258 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The First One [time] => 2007-11-04 06:41:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The first one I ever met was you.
The only true one I really met was you.
The only love of my heart that stole my heart and soul away was you.
The reason why I say you are the first one is because you are, the only one that I really adore and care about a lot.
The first one to make true love to me.
The first one to make me call out your name.
The first one not to stop when I say so.
The first one who really cared about me, not for my body but for my soul.
The first one to make me lose all control.
The first one to pay any attention to me at all.
The first one to do anything to me at all.
The first one to do anything perfect.
You really truly are the First One.
You are # 1 in my heart and in my soul and mind.
When I think about you my heart goes pitter-patter all day long.
To the First One. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 43 [informant] => TooPhat [notes] => |||Edited for spelling, as requested. - Moderator_14||| [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

The First One

Contributed by TooPhat on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 06:41:44 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

The first one I ever met was you.
The only true one I really met was you.
The only love of my heart that stole my heart and soul away was you.
The reason why I say you are the first one is because you are, the only one that I really adore and care about a lot.
The first one to make true love to me.
The first one to make me call out your name.
The first one not to stop when I say so.
The first one who really cared about me, not for my body but for my soul.
The first one to make me lose all control.
The first one to pay any attention to me at all.
The first one to do anything to me at all.
The first one to do anything perfect.
You really truly are the First One.
You are # 1 in my heart and in my soul and mind.
When I think about you my heart goes pitter-patter all day long.
To the First One.

Copyright © TooPhat ... [ 2007-11-04 06:41:44]
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Re: The First One (User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 11:12:46 AM AEST
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Great poem

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