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Can you feel the beat of my heart, my love
It beats like a drum in a rhythmic flow
Filled with a desire heating up inside me
Moments like these, I feel myself glow

The very thought of ye makes my skin react
Each nerve is on heightened alert
Fine hairs raised all over my body
I'm breathless without any effort

Sing to me songs of freedom
Fill my senses with love and joy
Right the wrongs we have created
Wisdom and compassion, we must deploy

Cherish one another like never before
Realizing how close the end came
Glad I am... to hear your voice
Whence in the night...you call my name

11/1/07
Laura Howell Horner [comments] => 6 [counter] => 419 [topic] => 2 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Cherish

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 12:53:13 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Can you feel the beat of my heart, my love
It beats like a drum in a rhythmic flow
Filled with a desire heating up inside me
Moments like these, I feel myself glow

The very thought of ye makes my skin react
Each nerve is on heightened alert
Fine hairs raised all over my body
I'm breathless without any effort

Sing to me songs of freedom
Fill my senses with love and joy
Right the wrongs we have created
Wisdom and compassion, we must deploy

Cherish one another like never before
Realizing how close the end came
Glad I am... to hear your voice
Whence in the night...you call my name

11/1/07
Laura Howell Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-11-03 00:53:13]
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Re: Cherish (User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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hey a well written piece that captures the a marriage that still has love and passion left in it..its passionate and yet subdues like married life..heheh..keep it up!!!(by the way m not married!!!!!!)

Re: Cherish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 04:19:57 AM AEST
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Most encouraging to read. Beautifuly expressed my sister laura . . .

peace and hugs 2u and yours . . .

Your Hippie Brother Ben . . .

bjps

Re: Cherish (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 02:12:14 PM AEST
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Beautifull write, sis. I'm so happy to see you on the upside of things.
Hang tuff.
big huggs, luv, smiles,
emy

Re: Cherish (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 03:42:14 AM AEST
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perfect. Just too damn perfect, sis.

I haven't much else to say about this. Just that it is so glorious
to witness a happy heart flowing through your words. :)

Beautiful, as truth generally is.

love, peace and hugs to you, hun

~MG

Re: Cherish (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 09:07:49 AM AEST
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Sweetly written on the essence of what a trle relationship should be like. Well written.
Take care,
David

Re: Cherish (User Rating: 1 )
by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 06:20:57 PM AEST
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It echoes many of my own sentiments, very well constructed by someone who obviously knows and appreciates love.

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