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Array ( [sid] => 138213 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The truth of life [time] => 2007-11-02 15:26:44 [hometext] => written on Feb 3, 04- After my mother attepted suicide when I moved to my fathers [bodytext] => What is life where everyone is your friend
When the word 'enemy' doesnt have an end

Everyone I love and care for, wonders on suicide
Sorrow, Misery, anger- is all there is

No happiness, fun or energy
just forgotten from the world were in

The ones you love judge your secrets so deep with sorrow
secrets so deep not even your closest friend can know

They eat around you without out offering food to those with little money
Not even enough money to buy warmth, a candy bar or a sweet jar of honey

even friends to take you places to get the clothes you need
or to visit that sick and dying parent you never see

It times like these is when you know your not wanted
the company, friendship, help or caring
only for what others can get [comments] => 1 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 36 [informant] => sensible_paper [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The truth of life

Contributed by sensible_paper on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 03:26:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

What is life where everyone is your friend
When the word 'enemy' doesnt have an end

Everyone I love and care for, wonders on suicide
Sorrow, Misery, anger- is all there is

No happiness, fun or energy
just forgotten from the world were in

The ones you love judge your secrets so deep with sorrow
secrets so deep not even your closest friend can know

They eat around you without out offering food to those with little money
Not even enough money to buy warmth, a candy bar or a sweet jar of honey

even friends to take you places to get the clothes you need
or to visit that sick and dying parent you never see

It times like these is when you know your not wanted
the company, friendship, help or caring
only for what others can get

Copyright © sensible_paper ... [ 2007-11-02 15:26:44]
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Re: The truth of life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 03:49:24 PM AEST
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I have tears flowing down my cheeks, that is truth.

You touched on so many truths here, and the sadness dripped .

I enjoyed the poem, I also relate to it.

The last stanza ripped my heart, that lonely feeling of not being wanted... God it is the worst one in the world.

I have had a few days to sit and reflect, get back to a soul level..

nature hon never leaves you lonely...

Hugs

Michelle

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