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Array ( [sid] => 138211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wut do u wnt frm me? [time] => 2007-11-02 14:34:22 [hometext] => The title is meant to be spelled in that specific slang. [bodytext] => what do you want is it for me to care
that love no longer lingers in the air
I know that today makes the anniversary of you and me
Stop the "i love you"s the feelings we once had have ceased to be
All our friends remember the love we once shared
Along with those nights we breathed the same air.

It use to be, I couldn't sleep without you by my side
Then came that day, the flame in my heart died
There was someone else that was taking my place in your soul
That spark we once had, now looks like slippery black coal
A phone call is how my world came to stop
With only five words spoken, i could feel my lungs drop
and fell on the floors; the ones you held me on during those bitter nights
we went through hell and back during those drug filled fights

There was once a time, where i held you in my arms and you were mine
But now, i've just been pushed to the back of the line
I'm content with that, seeing how your miles away
And I'm stuck here letting hearing your voice again ruin my day
I'm done with the anguish you left me to endure
Letting go is something of which I'm not sure

So Just pass me one more beer
And let me make this memory of you disappear
For now, I say Goodbye to the feelings of you and me,
They'll only be a faded memory lost at sea.. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 52 [informant] => happybunnyfan [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )
Wut do u wnt frm me?

Contributed by happybunnyfan on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 02:34:22 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



what do you want is it for me to care
that love no longer lingers in the air
I know that today makes the anniversary of you and me
Stop the "i love you"s the feelings we once had have ceased to be
All our friends remember the love we once shared
Along with those nights we breathed the same air.

It use to be, I couldn't sleep without you by my side
Then came that day, the flame in my heart died
There was someone else that was taking my place in your soul
That spark we once had, now looks like slippery black coal
A phone call is how my world came to stop
With only five words spoken, i could feel my lungs drop
and fell on the floors; the ones you held me on during those bitter nights
we went through hell and back during those drug filled fights

There was once a time, where i held you in my arms and you were mine
But now, i've just been pushed to the back of the line
I'm content with that, seeing how your miles away
And I'm stuck here letting hearing your voice again ruin my day
I'm done with the anguish you left me to endure
Letting go is something of which I'm not sure

So Just pass me one more beer
And let me make this memory of you disappear
For now, I say Goodbye to the feelings of you and me,
They'll only be a faded memory lost at sea..




Copyright © happybunnyfan ... [ 2007-11-02 14:34:22]
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Re: Wut do u wnt frm me? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 04:21:05 PM AEST
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A faded memory lost at sea, that line is so powerful.. The sea and its force and how it could easily devour..

The entire write is lovely, though so sad.
I hope your heart mends.

Michelle




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