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When my body bleeds my soul cry’s out
No ones ever at my side
There’s no one to hold me and say everything’s Aright everything’s going to be alright
I’m always going to be alone no one cares and no one ever will
BY: HEATHER JOHNSON
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Leave it

Contributed by blackrose233 on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:34:11 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I can’t feel so Leave the wound open I want to see it bleed that’s how I know I’m alive
When my body bleeds my soul cry’s out
No ones ever at my side
There’s no one to hold me and say everything’s Aright everything’s going to be alright
I’m always going to be alone no one cares and no one ever will
BY: HEATHER JOHNSON

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Re: Leave it (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:40:18 PM AEST
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I am sorry that you are feeling this way.
This write bleeds onto the page.

Take care

Michelle

Re: Leave it (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:42:06 PM AEST
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No one cares?
It's a sad day indeed when a person stops caring about one thing or another. Especially about a great poet like you.
If it helps, Heather, I care...
I care because I know what it feels like to feel this way. You feel like just a cog in the wheel and that no one is ever going to come to you to tell you it is okay.
But that's not true. The only thing YOU have to do is not give up caring about yourself.
And maybe seek out others you think may care if they knew how you felt.
If you ever need to talk, all us poets at YPDC share a lot of the same feelings, so feel free to contact me.
Nice imagery in this poem, Heather! Keep up the good work and don't lose hope!
(Oh, and thanks for commenting on my love poem.)

Re: Leave it (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 02:02:42 PM AEST
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Your poem is indeed a very heartfelt confession of emotion. I too have felt this way, and have learned that even in my darkest hour there is always a light that cares enough to shine. Sometimes we don't see it immediately, and it feels that we will never see it at all--but it is there, shining for us. May you find the comfort of that light.

Many blessings.

Re: Leave it (User Rating: 1 )
by law_glen18 on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 06:16:19 PM AEST
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as long as you have a inner voice, somebody will hear you cry. neat poem

Re: Leave it (User Rating: 1 )
by -Nik-91- on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 12:11:53 AM AEST
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i really like your poem its very good and if myou need some one to talk to im always here im always here to help people if the need it cause i really understand what the go through xxxx hope to talk to you soon bye xxxx

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