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Array ( [sid] => 138183 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Entity [time] => 2007-11-01 11:01:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => With my eyes
at this moment
I am
listening
to creepy eerie sounds,
I shiver and shake
as unseen hands
slowly
pull my covers down.

In the shadows
I can see
something
silently undulating
and I am feeling a dark presence...
I hear voices
Whispering
ohhhh.

The bed starts to shake
and my sanity is cracking
as a unknown force holds me down,
I struggle and scream
I shout
but no sounds come out of my mouth.

Shadows dance on the wall
and something
creeps across the creaky wooden floor
and I feel like I am moving
in slow motion
although
I ain't moving at all.

This is for real
this is no dream
I yell for help
with silent screams,
the entity is deep inside
I can barely breathe
and I can only move my eyes. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 13 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Entity

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 11:01:39 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

With my eyes
at this moment
I am
listening
to creepy eerie sounds,
I shiver and shake
as unseen hands
slowly
pull my covers down.

In the shadows
I can see
something
silently undulating
and I am feeling a dark presence...
I hear voices
Whispering
ohhhh.

The bed starts to shake
and my sanity is cracking
as a unknown force holds me down,
I struggle and scream
I shout
but no sounds come out of my mouth.

Shadows dance on the wall
and something
creeps across the creaky wooden floor
and I feel like I am moving
in slow motion
although
I ain't moving at all.

This is for real
this is no dream
I yell for help
with silent screams,
the entity is deep inside
I can barely breathe
and I can only move my eyes.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-11-01 11:01:39]
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Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:34:08 PM AEST
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This reminds me of a poem that I wrote called Ghostly Encounter.
Take a look, if you will.
Your poem is much more frightening, though.
I really like this one!
Keep up the great writing, Utopia!

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:45:16 PM AEST
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ooooooo shivers yes indeed this gave me the spooks..

May the night be free of the entity.....

Michelle

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 07:46:44 PM AEST
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I remember this one.
good work and sad trip.
huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 09:50:32 PM AEST
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Absolutely awesome imagery.

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 10:43:28 PM AEST
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That was certainly creepy, but very well written!

Excellent Post!

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 02:40:14 PM AEST
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C R E E P Y

what a perfect post for this time of year! But it damn near
makes me not want to sleep .. it kinda reminded me of Nightmare
on Elm Street ... just gave me the same eerie feeling. Like falling
asleep and awakening to a nightmare.

Great post. :)

(wish I wasn't almost on my way to bed though .. lol)

~Breezy

Re: The Entity (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:11:17 AM AEST
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It's taken me all this time to be courageous and you just ruined years of hard work....I'm hiding under the bed again...lol Nice job. As said...great for the spooky time of year.

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