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CAN I CRY

DO I WALK AWAY AND SAY GOODBYE

DO I LOVE YOU EVEN THOUGH YOU HATE ME

DO I STAY ,JUST WAIT AND SEE

DO I MOVE ON ,DO I GO AWAY

WILL IT HELP IF I SIT AND PRAY

DO YOU LOVE ME DO YOU LEAVE ME

DO YOU JUST SET ME FREE

CAN I BREATH CAN I FEEL

IS THIS LIFE I SEE SOMETHING REAL

IS IT FAKE LIKE YOUR IMPLANTED BREASTS

DO WE HAVE TO FIGHT FOREVER ,CAN WE TAKE A REST

DO YOU LOVE ME , DO YOU EVEN CARE

AND WHAT'S WITH THAT EVIL STARE

I'M LETTING YOU GO

SO NOW YOU KNOW

JUST WALK AWAY ,GET LOST

I DON'T CARE ANYMORE ,I CUT MY COST

ONE LESS MOUTH TO FEED

NO MORE MY HEART WILL BLEED

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PAIN AND HATRED

Contributed by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 01:03:19 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

CAN I DIE

CAN I CRY

DO I WALK AWAY AND SAY GOODBYE

DO I LOVE YOU EVEN THOUGH YOU HATE ME

DO I STAY ,JUST WAIT AND SEE

DO I MOVE ON ,DO I GO AWAY

WILL IT HELP IF I SIT AND PRAY

DO YOU LOVE ME DO YOU LEAVE ME

DO YOU JUST SET ME FREE

CAN I BREATH CAN I FEEL

IS THIS LIFE I SEE SOMETHING REAL

IS IT FAKE LIKE YOUR IMPLANTED BREASTS

DO WE HAVE TO FIGHT FOREVER ,CAN WE TAKE A REST

DO YOU LOVE ME , DO YOU EVEN CARE

AND WHAT'S WITH THAT EVIL STARE

I'M LETTING YOU GO

SO NOW YOU KNOW

JUST WALK AWAY ,GET LOST

I DON'T CARE ANYMORE ,I CUT MY COST

ONE LESS MOUTH TO FEED

NO MORE MY HEART WILL BLEED

Copyright © drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate ... [ 2007-10-31 13:03:19]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: PAIN AND HATRED (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 02:15:37 PM AEST
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Painful and heartbreaking to read..
A good write, expression and flow well done.

At times it is best to just walk away... painful as it is.

Goodbye hurts but is a different hurt than stayin in the line of fire that does ones soul in.

Michelle

Re: PAIN AND HATRED (User Rating: 1 )
by redsleeve on Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 09:22:12 AM AEST
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great post!

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