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Array ( [sid] => 13814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I hope I awake [time] => 2003-03-06 04:30:00 [hometext] => “Maybe things as bad as they are, are the way they are, because they are right, because your not then only person in the world.”
Please comment just write "I love it" or "I hate it" [bodytext] =>
I stare at the wall
I stare at my wrist
all time has stopped
I just sit in bliss
staring at you
frozen in time
the world has stopped
one step in front of the line
I might miss my friends
I might miss my family
but I’m the only one breathing
seeing time through my eyes
maybe somewhere else your living out your life
or maybe your stuck in time
leaving me to be
forever just maybe

would u cry if u were the only one left
I wouldn’t
I won’t
I like being here alone
if I push up off your chair
would you shatter like glass cuz your cold and stiff like ice
I cross my legs
and tug at my skirt
I sip on my margarita
and laugh at the world
it’s all mine
money, cars, dreams
that survive on fairy dust and star light
wut a wonderful world if there was only me
no one to bother
no one to see
no one to hate me

but there is one
one in my dreams
maybe I’ll find him
his glass body
now that there’s only me

I found the one I never met
to find his tears frozen on his mothers checks
holding her tight as they both faded away
I caused so much pain
but what’s it worth
for me to be happy
his pain
stopped in time
or my suicide
lost in life
will things be like this forever
can I reverse the pain I held so deep
for so long
instead of dying when It all got released, all my dreams
time stopped
time frozen
time lied and showed my what I didn’t want to see
so much hate
so much pain
a tear runs down my face
“I didn’t mean to do this to you my unknowing love”
and then it rained
and then I cried
and then I prayed
maybe this isn’t such a good day
I hope I awake
and it’s all a dream [comments] => 4 [counter] => 265 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Percursors [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I hope I awake

Contributed by Percursors on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




I stare at the wall
I stare at my wrist
all time has stopped
I just sit in bliss
staring at you
frozen in time
the world has stopped
one step in front of the line
I might miss my friends
I might miss my family
but I’m the only one breathing
seeing time through my eyes
maybe somewhere else your living out your life
or maybe your stuck in time
leaving me to be
forever just maybe

would u cry if u were the only one left
I wouldn’t
I won’t
I like being here alone
if I push up off your chair
would you shatter like glass cuz your cold and stiff like ice
I cross my legs
and tug at my skirt
I sip on my margarita
and laugh at the world
it’s all mine
money, cars, dreams
that survive on fairy dust and star light
wut a wonderful world if there was only me
no one to bother
no one to see
no one to hate me

but there is one
one in my dreams
maybe I’ll find him
his glass body
now that there’s only me

I found the one I never met
to find his tears frozen on his mothers checks
holding her tight as they both faded away
I caused so much pain
but what’s it worth
for me to be happy
his pain
stopped in time
or my suicide
lost in life
will things be like this forever
can I reverse the pain I held so deep
for so long
instead of dying when It all got released, all my dreams
time stopped
time frozen
time lied and showed my what I didn’t want to see
so much hate
so much pain
a tear runs down my face
“I didn’t mean to do this to you my unknowing love”
and then it rained
and then I cried
and then I prayed
maybe this isn’t such a good day
I hope I awake
and it’s all a dream




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Re: I hope I awake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:15:26 AM AEST
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This was good , I really enjoyed this poem, Sometimes we all feel like we are the only ones left. and we question ourselves over and over. But with time the pain does go away.
A great write.


Re: I hope I awake (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 02:05:57 PM AEST
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WAKE UP!!! WAKE UP!!!
:::::pinches you::::::
Yes......you are awake....
for you couldn't have expressed such
beauty on paper!!!! :-)
Nice Job!!!!!
Angel always....Godspeed! 0:-)


Re: I hope I awake (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Sunday, 9th March 2003 @ 01:12:26 AM AEST
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Love it...
Amy


Re: I hope I awake (User Rating: 1 )
by nikkie on Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 04:52:48 PM AEST
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U know....U say in your note at the top jus to coment on it and atleast say i love it or i hate it...but im not jus comenting bcuz u say so im comenting bcuz its really good!! We sumtimes feel that things are real even when we dream until we wake up bcuz i know I've been there. I've dreamt about things and thought that they were really real! We figure it out when we wake up. I think u've wokn up! Great write..Nikkie




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