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[sid] => 138120
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Please Hold On
[time] => 2007-10-29 17:01:38
[hometext] => Written for those who have watched someone they love slowly slip away in front of them...
[bodytext] => The stress is so hard It eats my soul But i'll hang on forever For i hold Hope She pushes me away When she is really sad To think i cant help her Feels so really bad She needs someone who truly cares Will she realize soon that I'm here That things may be hard, really tough But thats not enough to not give her my love Inside i strain to know what is right To stay when she says go, to leave her on her own I sit and i hear her cry so hard If only she'd let me in surely i could take her pain I gave her a good day, the very best i could do When we get home i'm on my own and she's crying too Sitting quietly i try not to despair But i listen to her cry and hate myself, unfair I don't know why she cry's I feel its me, makes me want to die I need to be the best so she feels ok But she is sad though i try everyday I wish she could tell me when something is wrong Rather than push me away and listen to some songs I feel like i can never help Maybe it is me, would she really want me gone? But still i struggle, to know what to do It's not as simple as an i love you She tells me to listen when she says go But is that really the right thing to do? When she is depressed I worry she will cut So i fear if i leave her alone That she'll not be here tomorrow So here i will sit Ten meters away So if she hurts herself I'll be the first to react My presence is dragging her down I ask for a smile i get a frown Am i the center of all her pain I don't want to see her hurt again But what can i do I'm to messed up myself I need to know she feels love But can i truly help? The center point of a revolving circle Can't speed up can't slow down Just do the best i can for how i feel I just wish i could save her, I'm here, I'm real I love her so, its so hard to go... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 322 [topic] => 8 [informant] => law_glen18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AmericanTragedy )
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