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Array ( [sid] => 138119 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Tell Myself Im Done with You [time] => 2007-10-29 16:57:30 [hometext] => make me numb so i dont care [bodytext] => I tell myself I’m done with you
After everything you’ve put me through
Not only did you break my heart
Oh no, that was just the very start

You fed me lies that I could devour
I thought they were sweet but they were so sour
They stung so deep like shards of glass
And so the pain did surely last

But now you’ve hit an ultimate low
Get your new lover to deliver the blow
Tell me I was a big mistake
That our love was completely fake

She says you don’t need me in your new life
The words cut my heart so deep like a knife
My body is quivering as if I were cold
The things she says are so very bold

I wonder if this is what you really feel
For if it is true I don’t know if I can deal
I can’t believe you let her hurt me this way
My mind is completely beyond disarray

And so I tell myself I’m done with you
After all these things you put me through
But I don’t even believe what I say
My love for you just won’t go away [comments] => 4 [counter] => 294 [topic] => 22 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

I Tell Myself Im Done with You

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 04:57:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I tell myself I’m done with you
After everything you’ve put me through
Not only did you break my heart
Oh no, that was just the very start

You fed me lies that I could devour
I thought they were sweet but they were so sour
They stung so deep like shards of glass
And so the pain did surely last

But now you’ve hit an ultimate low
Get your new lover to deliver the blow
Tell me I was a big mistake
That our love was completely fake

She says you don’t need me in your new life
The words cut my heart so deep like a knife
My body is quivering as if I were cold
The things she says are so very bold

I wonder if this is what you really feel
For if it is true I don’t know if I can deal
I can’t believe you let her hurt me this way
My mind is completely beyond disarray

And so I tell myself I’m done with you
After all these things you put me through
But I don’t even believe what I say
My love for you just won’t go away

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2007-10-29 16:57:30]
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Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You (User Rating: 1 )
by law_glen18 on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 06:56:02 PM AEST
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This poem is just... Wow. It had me in its grip. Full of raw emotion it leaves you wanting to read on. The feeling and power behind this poem, together with the knowledge that this experience is something most of us go through at some point in our lives, makes for a really good poem. All the best to the author, never lose hope

Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:20:46 PM AEST
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uh huh, I can relate.
Awesome, powerfull write.
huggs,
emy

Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 10:28:11 PM AEST
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really good poem! hard hitting, straight to the point.

Re: I Tell Myself Im Done with You (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 07:55:18 AM AEST
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wow this is a very powerful emotional write.. Its good that you can express this feeling and make such beauitful poetry with it.. I hope you get through this.. but remember there is hope and someone out there for you.. never give up the hope. lovely poem here.

rock on,

vampyress Jenni

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