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Array ( [sid] => 138118 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my faded point of view [time] => 2007-10-29 15:16:46 [hometext] => HMMMM wrote this as a song at first for my bannd but i don't know if i'm gonna use it , it's about well my faded ppoint of view never getting throught to that person that drives you crazy ! lol [bodytext] => My Faded Point Of View

The medication O so faceless
like a patient I just take it
this life seems cold with only self hatred
the side effects refuse to let go never let me show
my point of view is faded
This medication so dependent
like a patient but O so differnt
every dose brings me close
to my twisted sick point of view
nothing I could or can do
nothing to say to get through to you
my faded point of view!



I can feel it
so I try to push it back
this twisted sickness that keeps me alive
it infected my life with every empty lie
these screams I exhale
bring me closer to ending this hell
it's independence leaves me injected
leading me to see that there's nothing left to be
so I'll face it and fake it out
till you see the faded point of my view.

( Sorry isn't enough from you)
(Your have to give up everything)
(sorry isn't enough from you)
(have you know memorie of the pain you put me through?)
(Sorry isn't enought from you......)
The medication O so faceless
like a patient I just take it
this life seems cold with only self hatred
the side effects refuse to let go never let me show
my point of view is faded
This medication so dependent
like a patient but O so differnt
every dose brings me close
to my twisted sick point of view
nothing I could or can do
nothing to say to get through to you
my faded point of view!

Rethink what you say
Cause you know
I'll throw it in your face
Your the one to blame
Don't qustion my reason to walk away
A differnt person today
I'll Throw it in your face
all this pain you gave take it back with you into your grave
I'll force you to face the shame
don't speak
I don't wanna here you say
(I'm sorry)
(i'm sorry......)
Because it dosn't mean a dame thing to me
When I'm down on the ground crawling on my knees
Because sorry dosn't mean a thing
When your letting me bleed
no sorry dosn't mean a thing
when your killing me in my sleep
Now that you've suffocated
You feel like you've been manipulated
Now that you see that they all faked it
You try to fill the empty place taken
but your find no sympathy from me
Sorry dosn't mean a thing
when you cut my wrist and let them bleed!!
( Sorry isn't enough from you)
(You'll have to give up everything)
(sorry isn't enough from you)
(You'll have to crawl on your knees?)
(Sorry isn't enought from you.....
Your The medication O so faceless
like a patient I just take it
this life seems cold with only self hatred
the side effects refuse to let go never let me show
my point of view is faded
your This medication so dependent
like a patient but O so differnt
every dose brings me close
to my twisted sick point of view
nothing I could or can do
nothing to say to get through to you
my faded point of view [comments] => 1 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 6 [informant] => danhar07 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
my faded point of view

Contributed by danhar07 on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 03:16:46 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



My Faded Point Of View

The medication O so faceless
like a patient I just take it
this life seems cold with only self hatred
the side effects refuse to let go never let me show
my point of view is faded
This medication so dependent
like a patient but O so differnt
every dose brings me close
to my twisted sick point of view
nothing I could or can do
nothing to say to get through to you
my faded point of view!



I can feel it
so I try to push it back
this twisted sickness that keeps me alive
it infected my life with every empty lie
these screams I exhale
bring me closer to ending this hell
it's independence leaves me injected
leading me to see that there's nothing left to be
so I'll face it and fake it out
till you see the faded point of my view.

( Sorry isn't enough from you)
(Your have to give up everything)
(sorry isn't enough from you)
(have you know memorie of the pain you put me through?)
(Sorry isn't enought from you......)
The medication O so faceless
like a patient I just take it
this life seems cold with only self hatred
the side effects refuse to let go never let me show
my point of view is faded
This medication so dependent
like a patient but O so differnt
every dose brings me close
to my twisted sick point of view
nothing I could or can do
nothing to say to get through to you
my faded point of view!

Rethink what you say
Cause you know
I'll throw it in your face
Your the one to blame
Don't qustion my reason to walk away
A differnt person today
I'll Throw it in your face
all this pain you gave take it back with you into your grave
I'll force you to face the shame
don't speak
I don't wanna here you say
(I'm sorry)
(i'm sorry......)
Because it dosn't mean a dame thing to me
When I'm down on the ground crawling on my knees
Because sorry dosn't mean a thing
When your letting me bleed
no sorry dosn't mean a thing
when your killing me in my sleep
Now that you've suffocated
You feel like you've been manipulated
Now that you see that they all faked it
You try to fill the empty place taken
but your find no sympathy from me
Sorry dosn't mean a thing
when you cut my wrist and let them bleed!!
( Sorry isn't enough from you)
(You'll have to give up everything)
(sorry isn't enough from you)
(You'll have to crawl on your knees?)
(Sorry isn't enought from you.....
Your The medication O so faceless
like a patient I just take it
this life seems cold with only self hatred
the side effects refuse to let go never let me show
my point of view is faded
your This medication so dependent
like a patient but O so differnt
every dose brings me close
to my twisted sick point of view
nothing I could or can do
nothing to say to get through to you
my faded point of view




Copyright © danhar07 ... [ 2007-10-29 15:16:46]
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Re: my faded point of view (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 08:58:45 PM AEST
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I'd say a very powerfull point of veiw.
Incredibly written.
huggs,
emy




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