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Array ( [sid] => 138115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => secrets [time] => 2007-10-29 11:54:47 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I値l hold your head
I値l let you weep
I feel your shoulder shudder
A pain you hold so deep

Share your secrets with me
I値l lock the truth in my heart
Lay the key in my soul
Hold your cares in my hand
And I値l never let them go

Let the pain out
Don稚 hold the secrets any longer
Whisper in my ear
It will only make you stronger.

Stretch out your hand
Uncurl your finger and take the key
Pouring out your soul
Will only set you free

You whisper in my ear
Unleash the secrets of your life
With another shoulder to carry the burden
It wont be so sharp a knife

So wrap your arms around me
I値l run my fingers through your hair
The burdens so much easier
When you care enough to share

Now bathe in the silence
Basque in the feeling
No secrets between us anymore
Only the sound of two hearts beating
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secrets

Contributed by enfield on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 11:54:47 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I値l hold your head
I値l let you weep
I feel your shoulder shudder
A pain you hold so deep

Share your secrets with me
I値l lock the truth in my heart
Lay the key in my soul
Hold your cares in my hand
And I値l never let them go

Let the pain out
Don稚 hold the secrets any longer
Whisper in my ear
It will only make you stronger.

Stretch out your hand
Uncurl your finger and take the key
Pouring out your soul
Will only set you free

You whisper in my ear
Unleash the secrets of your life
With another shoulder to carry the burden
It wont be so sharp a knife

So wrap your arms around me
I値l run my fingers through your hair
The burdens so much easier
When you care enough to share

Now bathe in the silence
Basque in the feeling
No secrets between us anymore
Only the sound of two hearts beating




Copyright ﾂｩ enfield ... [ 2007-10-29 11:54:47]
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Re: secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:22:17 PM AEST
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Very sweet... quite touching, really. It's a wonderful sentiment. It should be that. There is a strength in "we two" that makes everything bearable.

I'm sure this must have meant much to the intended. Nicely done.


~Snemmy


Re: secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:35:35 PM AEST
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Wwwwwooooooo Very powerfull, healin, masterpeice.
Don't know who this is for but it touches deep into the soul.
Supercalafradualisticexpialadoshus.
huggs, heart smiles,
emy


Re: secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:35:38 PM AEST
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Wwwwwooooooo Very powerfull, healin, masterpeice.
Don't know who this is for but it touches deep into the soul.
Supercalafradualisticexpialadoshus.
huggs, heart smiles,
emy


Re: secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 07:57:08 AM AEST
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a very touching heartfelt write.. its very uplifting and gives one hope to trust in a friend beautiful job here

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: secrets (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 06:52:01 PM AEST
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I really like how you made this poem flow. Very touching.




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