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Array ( [sid] => 138106 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rain & Thunder [time] => 2007-10-29 06:26:20 [hometext] => I just want ot stay bacl in england with my sister and her family i dont want to be here in turkey [bodytext] => I love the rain
Cause then no one can tell im crying
The rain falling on my fall on my skin
As my tears fall from my cheeks
Thunder and lightening flashimg in the sky
My heart beat and the thunder beating as one
The loud bangs in the sky
BOOM! BOOM BOOM!
Falling to my knees anfd shouting
WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE THIS WAY
Im on top of a mountain
I shout KILL ME
Cause thats the only way i can leave
Silent tears drop from my face
I scream and shout my very loudest
WHY DID YOU CREATE ME
wHY DO I DESERVE TO LIVE
AND OTHERS DIE?
This place is slowly taking me away
But all i want is to be home
With my sister back in england
Im sick of my parents thinking they know whats best for me
Maybe for them they do nut not for me
I need to live my own life
Im the youngest here
And because of that i can never leave
Im not allowed:'( [comments] => 1 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 32 [informant] => -Nik-91- [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Rain & Thunder

Contributed by -Nik-91- on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 06:26:20 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I love the rain
Cause then no one can tell im crying
The rain falling on my fall on my skin
As my tears fall from my cheeks
Thunder and lightening flashimg in the sky
My heart beat and the thunder beating as one
The loud bangs in the sky
BOOM! BOOM BOOM!
Falling to my knees anfd shouting
WHY DOES IT HAVE TO BE THIS WAY
Im on top of a mountain
I shout KILL ME
Cause thats the only way i can leave
Silent tears drop from my face
I scream and shout my very loudest
WHY DID YOU CREATE ME
wHY DO I DESERVE TO LIVE
AND OTHERS DIE?
This place is slowly taking me away
But all i want is to be home
With my sister back in england
Im sick of my parents thinking they know whats best for me
Maybe for them they do nut not for me
I need to live my own life
Im the youngest here
And because of that i can never leave
Im not allowed:'(

Copyright © -Nik-91- ... [ 2007-10-29 06:26:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Rain & Thunder (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 01:02:03 AM AEST
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So much pain and frustration pours out of here, much like in the tears I suspect.
I hope you get what you desire for yourself.

Steve

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