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Array ( [sid] => 138102 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => PLAY ME? [time] => 2007-10-29 03:39:27 [hometext] => Two phone calls, Some folks are just selfish [bodytext] =>
I'm flesh-n-bone like you

If ya can't take, go on thru

Find anotha fool in games

No go knocckin on my window panes.

Honey, don't even try ta play me

Flipfloppin 'round, ya want win

Been played by very best

Ain't no time fo yoingnorent test.

Don't make me out fo games

Spent my time, brain unsane.

Ain't tryin to prove to you

Ain't no time fo the likes of you.

Ya gotta show me, don't tell

Can make ya walk backwards, hell yea

Life is awesomely precious, you bet.

That's one thing you seem to foget

You really ain't peddlin luv

Shore as there's skyes above

Bull **** flys on down road

Take anotha look, ain't no toad..

copyright emystar
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PLAY ME?

Contributed by emystar on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 03:39:27 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I'm flesh-n-bone like you

If ya can't take, go on thru

Find anotha fool in games

No go knocckin on my window panes.

Honey, don't even try ta play me

Flipfloppin 'round, ya want win

Been played by very best

Ain't no time fo yoingnorent test.

Don't make me out fo games

Spent my time, brain unsane.

Ain't tryin to prove to you

Ain't no time fo the likes of you.

Ya gotta show me, don't tell

Can make ya walk backwards, hell yea

Life is awesomely precious, you bet.

That's one thing you seem to foget

You really ain't peddlin luv

Shore as there's skyes above

Bull **** flys on down road

Take anotha look, ain't no toad..

copyright emystar

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2007-10-29 03:39:27]
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Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:14:45 AM AEST
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Aaaahh Tell it Tell it, sister. This is one fired up write, your language usage was rolling off my tongue. Hee Hee. Good one.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:09:47 PM AEST
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ooh! this will make someone take a breath, before they leap" lol! good write. Vincent

Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 12:32:31 AM AEST
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Omigosh!! Em ..YYYYYYYYYYYY!! lol

Wow! I can feel so much conviction and anger in this. Something
we don't see very often from you. I love how you just let
the emotion guide the write. It is so real and raw!!

Bravo poet! Bravo!!

~Breezy

Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 05:19:46 AM AEST
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This is a great poem. Excellent work!!

Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by gribbs on Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 01:00:20 AM AEST
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very uniquely worded...a person with a strong constitution...

Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by BOZEEN on Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 06:25:28 AM AEST
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THAT WAS GREAT I LIKE HOW YOU JUST TOLD THEM OFF IN SPADES,TO THE POINT. GO GIRL

Re: PLAY ME? (User Rating: 1 )
by kaycas on Saturday, 12th January 2008 @ 02:48:11 AM AEST
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Being new to the site, when I first commented on one of your works I said I felt like singing to it, I did not realise you wrote lyrics. Again I just feel like singing to these words. You are very talented. Are your words from life experiences or purely what you think to write about?
Kay

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