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Array ( [sid] => 138085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => To Becca [time] => 2007-10-28 12:44:07 [hometext] => After meeting this girl at University, I liked her. Anyway when I saw her in a club, she asked me what I was doin there and I said 'Im only here for 1 reason' which was meant 2 mean 2 see her, but she thought I meant 4 sex, and got with someone else. LOL [bodytext] => I messed up the other night,
that's why im writing you tonight.
You held my hand and gave me an opportunity.
But I made a mistake and threw away the key.
Foolish, stupid mistake I made.
Something I said, seen in the wrong shade.
Whats so messed up is I actually like You.

I'll just have to except it, how one thing can change so much.
Stupidly said I admit, so now I lose your touch.
what I said was meant to be nice.
I guess you could say I was trying to break the ice.
but a bad choice of words, disguised my true meaning.
And im writing this to deal with this feeling.

I don't blame you for mistaking what I meant.
What you thought would seem to be the nature of my intend.
But in my drunken head, it all seem to make perfect sense.
I stupidly thought you were thinking on the same frequency as this drunk.
since you wern't I ended up sunk.
I simply meant the reason for my presence was you.

Anyway I thought I'd just let you know,
that how I was, was an all time low.
I can't explain away any of the rest.
but I guess i'll give it my best.
simply im sorry.

I know your with someone else now and I accept.
A foolish mistake will always have to pay a debt.
So i'll learn from my mistake, the hard way so it would seem
But maybe one day i'll get a chance to redeem.

I might be mistaken in even thinking,
that before my actions due to heavy drinking,
there was a chance you liked me to.
If so, please forget I ever wrote you.
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To Becca

Contributed by His_Infernal_Majesty on Sunday, 28th October 2007 @ 12:44:07 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I messed up the other night,
that's why im writing you tonight.
You held my hand and gave me an opportunity.
But I made a mistake and threw away the key.
Foolish, stupid mistake I made.
Something I said, seen in the wrong shade.
Whats so messed up is I actually like You.

I'll just have to except it, how one thing can change so much.
Stupidly said I admit, so now I lose your touch.
what I said was meant to be nice.
I guess you could say I was trying to break the ice.
but a bad choice of words, disguised my true meaning.
And im writing this to deal with this feeling.

I don't blame you for mistaking what I meant.
What you thought would seem to be the nature of my intend.
But in my drunken head, it all seem to make perfect sense.
I stupidly thought you were thinking on the same frequency as this drunk.
since you wern't I ended up sunk.
I simply meant the reason for my presence was you.

Anyway I thought I'd just let you know,
that how I was, was an all time low.
I can't explain away any of the rest.
but I guess i'll give it my best.
simply im sorry.

I know your with someone else now and I accept.
A foolish mistake will always have to pay a debt.
So i'll learn from my mistake, the hard way so it would seem
But maybe one day i'll get a chance to redeem.

I might be mistaken in even thinking,
that before my actions due to heavy drinking,
there was a chance you liked me to.
If so, please forget I ever wrote you.




Copyright © His_Infernal_Majesty ... [ 2007-10-28 12:44:07]
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