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Array ( [sid] => 138048 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'm undecided about the title [time] => 2007-10-27 00:42:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A day like any other is what was on my mind

I stepped out of the house into the blinding sunshine

Bag over shoulder, I proceed down the street

Seeing all these people who I didin't want to meet

They speakin' but mama said "Don't make a peep"

I step into the school, drop my bag on the floor

They can me up and down, then I'm free

Go further more

I'm standing at my locker and today's a normal day

Then I glance to my left and see what's coming my way

A girl outta place

What gives her 'way is her race

The whole flow stops

This girl cannot exist

Eyes on the ground, she's thinkin similar to this

The plae is quiet, there's absolutely no noise

No rappin' from the boys

No gum smackin' from the girls

This is something that is gonna rock the teachers worlds

I sit down in class an she sits right next to me

This an't be happenin', a cruel jock from her family

This is punishment

You have to do the time in a place that's filled with crime

That's not funny

Cuz they puttin' her life on the line

Destroy her future, pay the price

That's a tearful sacrifice



A risk

To be ridiculed by friends

My reputation's end, but to help her rep begin

I'm glad my ma name me, "Cassie"

That woman has common sense, to name me something like this

So I'd have a job, regardless

Fearful at first she was

Then showed me the same respect and love

"Shela"

I thought funny as hell, started laughing to myself

Shela joined as well

Inseparable

From that day on she was my girl

We were were from two different worlds

And we taught each other barrels



Our friendship

It woulda lasted a life

If I'd have thought twice

bout my hood that cause families strife

Add one more fatality to the fight

Cuz on that day

the bullets came flyin' our way

From every direction was the spray

And I blame myself to this very day

Cuz when the fire had finally ceased

I glanced over at an empty seat

On the ground layin' at my feet

Starring up at me with eyes that couldn't see

My sista Shela was taken from me

Deprieved of her life, I couldn't believe

Another punishment

She shouldn't have been hangin' with me

Cuz on that very mourning she could have went to the beach

To hang with real "friends"

but she kicked with me

Now she's buried six feet

and I'm left alone grievin' for me

cuz all my life we always blamed them

When all of this time, in our own house,

raisin' our kids, puttin' food in their mouth,

sleepin' in our beds

and grievin' our dead

there was something more impetuous

something more strange,

something so raw, but all has a name...

...you

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I'm undecided about the title

Contributed by rogue on Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 12:42:35 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



A day like any other is what was on my mind

I stepped out of the house into the blinding sunshine

Bag over shoulder, I proceed down the street

Seeing all these people who I didin't want to meet

They speakin' but mama said "Don't make a peep"

I step into the school, drop my bag on the floor

They can me up and down, then I'm free

Go further more

I'm standing at my locker and today's a normal day

Then I glance to my left and see what's coming my way

A girl outta place

What gives her 'way is her race

The whole flow stops

This girl cannot exist

Eyes on the ground, she's thinkin similar to this

The plae is quiet, there's absolutely no noise

No rappin' from the boys

No gum smackin' from the girls

This is something that is gonna rock the teachers worlds

I sit down in class an she sits right next to me

This an't be happenin', a cruel jock from her family

This is punishment

You have to do the time in a place that's filled with crime

That's not funny

Cuz they puttin' her life on the line

Destroy her future, pay the price

That's a tearful sacrifice



A risk

To be ridiculed by friends

My reputation's end, but to help her rep begin

I'm glad my ma name me, "Cassie"

That woman has common sense, to name me something like this

So I'd have a job, regardless

Fearful at first she was

Then showed me the same respect and love

"Shela"

I thought funny as hell, started laughing to myself

Shela joined as well

Inseparable

From that day on she was my girl

We were were from two different worlds

And we taught each other barrels



Our friendship

It woulda lasted a life

If I'd have thought twice

bout my hood that cause families strife

Add one more fatality to the fight

Cuz on that day

the bullets came flyin' our way

From every direction was the spray

And I blame myself to this very day

Cuz when the fire had finally ceased

I glanced over at an empty seat

On the ground layin' at my feet

Starring up at me with eyes that couldn't see

My sista Shela was taken from me

Deprieved of her life, I couldn't believe

Another punishment

She shouldn't have been hangin' with me

Cuz on that very mourning she could have went to the beach

To hang with real "friends"

but she kicked with me

Now she's buried six feet

and I'm left alone grievin' for me

cuz all my life we always blamed them

When all of this time, in our own house,

raisin' our kids, puttin' food in their mouth,

sleepin' in our beds

and grievin' our dead

there was something more impetuous

something more strange,

something so raw, but all has a name...

...you





Copyright © rogue ... [ 2007-10-27 00:42:35]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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