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Array ( [sid] => 138030 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word) [time] => 2007-10-26 10:00:18 [hometext] => Keep in mind its spoken word [bodytext] => She told me she had a way with words

and I assumed from our phone conversations

that she had luscious curves

I mean she said she was, 5 foot 2

eyes light blue

a little weight in all the right places

but she said I'll leave that to you

brown sandy hair

that, goes down to there

with soft beautiful skin

that, hypnotized men

and forced eyes to stare.

Though I try not to be superficial

to date a young women who is super official

is something that I could certainly get into

I mean this was way before I evaluated her mental

About me she just wanted to keep it simple

just my name " Yes I write and have two cute dimples"

and so that one drop rippled

until the wave grew as tall as Pharaoh's temple

but with only so much love that can cross these phone wires

I wanted her to be my queen, let folks address the sires

its hers my cars, money and palace

drop everything i know and skip a red eye to Dallas

only to see the disappointment in her face

"I Don't Date Outside My Race" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 43 [informant] => allidoiswrite82 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word)

Contributed by allidoiswrite82 on Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 10:00:18 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



She told me she had a way with words

and I assumed from our phone conversations

that she had luscious curves

I mean she said she was, 5 foot 2

eyes light blue

a little weight in all the right places

but she said I'll leave that to you

brown sandy hair

that, goes down to there

with soft beautiful skin

that, hypnotized men

and forced eyes to stare.

Though I try not to be superficial

to date a young women who is super official

is something that I could certainly get into

I mean this was way before I evaluated her mental

About me she just wanted to keep it simple

just my name " Yes I write and have two cute dimples"

and so that one drop rippled

until the wave grew as tall as Pharaoh's temple

but with only so much love that can cross these phone wires

I wanted her to be my queen, let folks address the sires

its hers my cars, money and palace

drop everything i know and skip a red eye to Dallas

only to see the disappointment in her face

"I Don't Date Outside My Race"




Copyright © allidoiswrite82 ... [ 2007-10-26 10:00:18]
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Re: I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word) (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 26th October 2007 @ 12:34:07 PM AEST
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So Sorry. OMFG that is unbelievable. Too bad you had to find out the hard way she was a racist and a small minded human. Wonderful write. I really am sorry you went through this, but it looks like to me, you deserve someone much better than her. Keep looking, my brother, keep looking. Not everyone is a petty idiot.
Best of luck to you.
Peace,
Laura


Re: I Dont Date Outside My Race (Spoken Word) (User Rating: 1 )
by Honey56 on Saturday, 27th October 2007 @ 02:27:58 AM AEST
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A beautiful write came out of your disappointment..But you will find your true soulmate..
Blessinga...




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