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[sid] => 13795
[catid] => 1
[aid] => Mick
[title] => ''No One Noticed''
[time] => 2003-03-05 07:30:00
[hometext] => i wrote this poem as it came to me, a lot of people love it, it comes from the pain that i feel. in the origanal copy it was actually suppose to be the girls suicide note.
[bodytext] => She walks down the hallway,
no one notices she's there. She thinks about her life, as she sits there. Wonders why she seems so different from all the rest. A young boy sits behind her, He taunts and teases her She sits and thinks about why she feels this pain, While that young boy will feel no pain or regret. She runs out of the room, tears stream down her face, her heart is broken and will never be replaced No one noticed that she left, No noticed that she was gone not even Jane. Jane sits in her desk ever so attentivley, a girl sitting beside jane makes a cruel remark. Jane laughs along, She just wants to have freinds. The young girl runs to her lockaer, Grabs her bags and books She slowly walks to the window outside of her class She see's jane smiling and laughing, Making new freinds not even noticing she isn't there, a tear of pain and hurt role's down her delecate cheek. She runs out the front doors, and heads for her house. The next day that young girl, She just wasn't there. Everyone was crying tears of regret, Even the young boy who treated her so cruelly They wish they could say sorry, They wished that they were nicer to her. maybe even showed her a little more kindess, acknowledged her every once in a while. Well you see what happened is that night before, The young girl to a gun and locked her door. A shot was fired, everyone heard Her parents rushed upstairs They couldn't get in, they knew something happened so they broke down the door They called 9-11, But they were to late, the young girl just didn't make it that faithful day. That night they prayed" Dear god protect her and keep her safe, let her know she is loved and missed by everyone below, and that we will love her till the end of our lives." And that is exactly what they did........ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 36 [informant] => 13ARTEMIS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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