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Array ( [sid] => 137827 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Spinning Round [time] => 2007-10-14 09:17:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Stuck in spiderwebs of rusted lace
Held back in time, steadfast
We rock to our beat in restricted paths
Keep our cool, you're saving face

It's being stuck in lines and boxes
Wanting to run out there and back
Around in tumbling circles
Merging myth and fact

Drowning in your faith and bubble bath
We walk along the shore
Straw colored girl, don't turn to leather
Do you feel that icy draft?

Spider girls with hairy legs, they run
Out falls their shiney hair.
Spiral down and up and down the stairs
And you'll leave those school boys stunned

It's being stuck in lines and boxes
Wanting to run out there, come back
Around in tumbling circles
Merging myth and fact

And we all run around [comments] => 3 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 73 [informant] => rachel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

Spinning Round

Contributed by rachel on Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 09:17:01 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Stuck in spiderwebs of rusted lace
Held back in time, steadfast
We rock to our beat in restricted paths
Keep our cool, you're saving face

It's being stuck in lines and boxes
Wanting to run out there and back
Around in tumbling circles
Merging myth and fact

Drowning in your faith and bubble bath
We walk along the shore
Straw colored girl, don't turn to leather
Do you feel that icy draft?

Spider girls with hairy legs, they run
Out falls their shiney hair.
Spiral down and up and down the stairs
And you'll leave those school boys stunned

It's being stuck in lines and boxes
Wanting to run out there, come back
Around in tumbling circles
Merging myth and fact

And we all run around

Copyright © rachel ... [ 2007-10-14 09:17:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Spinning Round (User Rating: 1 )
by ferasdour on Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 09:22:20 AM AEST
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yep

Re: Spinning Round (User Rating: 1 )
by Saruchan on Sunday, 14th October 2007 @ 09:23:22 AM AEST
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wow this is great! really powerful. thank you for sharing!

Re: Spinning Round (User Rating: 1 )
by MelodiousCorruption on Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 04:35:25 AM AEST
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that is very deep.
lovely

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