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Array ( [sid] => 13781 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => So Addicting [time] => 2003-03-05 19:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I watch the red ooze from my wrist,
and down my pale white arm.
As it hits the floor I have to wonder,
just how I got here now?
To this moment, to this place,
what horrific thing happened?
But nothing did, really,
I was just a kid.
Moody, yes, a tad irritable,
labeled “Antisocial”
by a few who didn’t know.
Nobody paid attention, though,
to all the tell tale signs.
“That’s just how she is,” they said,
“that’s just what high school’s like.”
But is this what high school’s like,
watching your own blood?
And trying to remember
just what brought you here,
with the tears spilling down your cheeks,
as blood rushes from your wounds.
“It’s a trend,” said some,
so not understanding.
It’s not a trend, it’s addicting,
you just can’t get enough
of the salty tears running down your cheeks,
or the blood trickling from your wrists. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => BeautifulRainbow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

So Addicting

Contributed by BeautifulRainbow on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I watch the red ooze from my wrist,
and down my pale white arm.
As it hits the floor I have to wonder,
just how I got here now?
To this moment, to this place,
what horrific thing happened?
But nothing did, really,
I was just a kid.
Moody, yes, a tad irritable,
labeled “Antisocial”
by a few who didn’t know.
Nobody paid attention, though,
to all the tell tale signs.
“That’s just how she is,” they said,
“that’s just what high school’s like.”
But is this what high school’s like,
watching your own blood?
And trying to remember
just what brought you here,
with the tears spilling down your cheeks,
as blood rushes from your wounds.
“It’s a trend,” said some,
so not understanding.
It’s not a trend, it’s addicting,
you just can’t get enough
of the salty tears running down your cheeks,
or the blood trickling from your wrists.

Copyright Â© BeautifulRainbow ... [ 2003-03-05 19:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:56:32 PM AEST
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TRUE, TRUE most people dont get how hard high school is...i loved it...

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by twinkletoes on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 12:07:36 AM AEST
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So many emotions and we are never ready for them at the age of this author. Let's hope this never comes true as life is worth pushing on.

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by TypenLutschen on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 10:49:03 AM AEST
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I relate.

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:27:19 AM AEST
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This poem is so true, SO true, i am addicted, and it scares me so much, sometimes i love it, sometimes i hate myself for it.

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 04:00:58 PM AEST
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so true... i am addicted, and i cant remember what brought me here... i dont know why i do what i do, i just know i do... great write...

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 05:03:06 PM AEST
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this is so true...i am there, with you all the way...it's just so hard...if you ever want to talk, pm me, i understand...

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 03:33:13 PM AEST
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This brings back memories a lot of memories. This is very true for me anyways. Good write and hang in there.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: So Addicting (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 08:42:32 PM AEST
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hang in there i know what your going through b/c im starting to become addicted i just started about two months ago and i cant stop and it is scarry you just want people to know the truth as long as your not the one telling them about it.

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