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Array ( [sid] => 137771 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Evil Twin [time] => 2007-10-11 03:47:16 [hometext] => Please leave a comment - thanx xx [bodytext] => My Evil Twin

Look at me
It’s my evil twin
Wonder where she has been
Wonder what she has seen
You can always tell its something mean
That’s not me, that’s just her
Twins in the same shell
I’m for heaven, she’s for hell
Look at me
Obviously an angel
You can see the difference
I can tell
I couldn’t just be nasty
I couldn’t make you cry
She’s destined for eternal damnation
While I angelically fly
I hear her horrid whispers
I see her snidey glance
I wish we had different passports
Coz I’d pack her off to France
Festering and stewing and vengeful
Vicious and spiteful and rude
Stabbing away at old wounds
Soaking up misery like food
Short Interlude

She’s evil; she’s mean, no in-between
Always creating a scene
While watching the fall out
She’ll purr and she’ll preen
Tainting and souring what could have been

I hate her and she loves it
She laughs, you’re so naive
Gullibility city
If I didn’t laugh, I’d heave
The crap you believe
You can’t be part of me

It’s all about survival
Kick em first you clown
Twinkling stars and powder puffs
Won’t stop them putting you down
Dig your knife in deeply
Twist it back and forth
Make them regret the pain they caused
Even if they haven’t done it yet
Make them regret
Hedge your bet

She makes me feel unclean
Like a putrid puss filled sore
Alter ego, juxtaposed
Evil to the core
Satan’s whore
I don’t want to say anymore

XShmokinX
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 205 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Shmokin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
My Evil Twin

Contributed by Shmokin on Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 03:47:16 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



My Evil Twin

Look at me
It’s my evil twin
Wonder where she has been
Wonder what she has seen
You can always tell its something mean
That’s not me, that’s just her
Twins in the same shell
I’m for heaven, she’s for hell
Look at me
Obviously an angel
You can see the difference
I can tell
I couldn’t just be nasty
I couldn’t make you cry
She’s destined for eternal damnation
While I angelically fly
I hear her horrid whispers
I see her snidey glance
I wish we had different passports
Coz I’d pack her off to France
Festering and stewing and vengeful
Vicious and spiteful and rude
Stabbing away at old wounds
Soaking up misery like food
Short Interlude

She’s evil; she’s mean, no in-between
Always creating a scene
While watching the fall out
She’ll purr and she’ll preen
Tainting and souring what could have been

I hate her and she loves it
She laughs, you’re so naive
Gullibility city
If I didn’t laugh, I’d heave
The crap you believe
You can’t be part of me

It’s all about survival
Kick em first you clown
Twinkling stars and powder puffs
Won’t stop them putting you down
Dig your knife in deeply
Twist it back and forth
Make them regret the pain they caused
Even if they haven’t done it yet
Make them regret
Hedge your bet

She makes me feel unclean
Like a putrid puss filled sore
Alter ego, juxtaposed
Evil to the core
Satan’s whore
I don’t want to say anymore

XShmokinX




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Re: My Evil Twin (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th October 2007 @ 04:23:24 AM AEST
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Quite a disparraging threat one's alter self can pose to the stability of one's better half, in any case this is deffinately worth the read
as well as the praise it receives . . .

Beautiful writting indeed . . .

thank you also for your comment and read
i deeply appreciate it . . .



Ben




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Re: My Evil Twin (User Rating: 1 )
by InfinitePoet on Thursday, 4th August 2011 @ 03:31:11 PM AEST
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Absolutely fantastic piece!!Could you by any chance be a gemini??? Well i am and this one says a thousand things relating to me in it!! Keep writing always!!Post and share here 24/7 or as often as poss!!
Peace,
Dana




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