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Array ( [sid] => 137750 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Out Of Time. [time] => 2007-10-10 02:10:54 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I got 5 minutes, 5 minutes left
Five minutes until they bring me to my death
So very close just to breathing my last breath
As I'm here in her garden I feel the breaking inside my chest
My emotions are asleep but they never seem to rest
And they can't seem to see just what might be coming next
I see blood drops like beads in my sweat
Falling memories of things I can't forget
They run like a crown right down my head
I'm laid on the ground face down like I'm dead
Crying out to something greater to let me pass what's ahead
They pound the nails in my hands
And on your cross stains of all the love I've bled
Echoes in my head of all the things you said
So with 4 minutes left can you hear me saying...
This is my will God... can hear me praying...

Dear Lord Heavenly Father...
Hear my prayers of entrusting and commending
Eternal light, shine upon this broken soul of mine,
Eternal Goodness, deliver me from evil,
Eternal Power, be my support,
Eternal Wisdom, scatter the darkness of my confusion,
Eternal Pity, have mercy upon me...
That with all my heart,mind,soul and strength,
May I seek thy face
And be brought by thy infinite mercy to thy holy presence...
Embrace me God, Amen...

I got 3 minutes 3 minutes left
3 minutes until they bring me to my death
I can hear them loud and clear closer than I guessed
They don't even understand right now what this is
They don't know who I am or what I have to give
But I thank you Lord for the ability to know how to forgive
See my death has been planned so many can come to live
See I know that I got just a few minutes left
I realize now this is my end
See I wont make a sound but this love I will defend
Wrap it around my wings as I ascend
Because I stand for this love and to dillute thy sin
I came to lay my life down, and all thats within
2 minutes I'll be bound and I'll face what's ahead...


I got 1 minute 1 minute left
1 minute till they bring me to my death
As the seconds fade away
Raining tears for me on this fateful day
And who they are doesn't matter anyway...
I got no time, no time left.
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Out Of Time.

Contributed by bleedthelove on Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 02:10:54 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I got 5 minutes, 5 minutes left
Five minutes until they bring me to my death
So very close just to breathing my last breath
As I'm here in her garden I feel the breaking inside my chest
My emotions are asleep but they never seem to rest
And they can't seem to see just what might be coming next
I see blood drops like beads in my sweat
Falling memories of things I can't forget
They run like a crown right down my head
I'm laid on the ground face down like I'm dead
Crying out to something greater to let me pass what's ahead
They pound the nails in my hands
And on your cross stains of all the love I've bled
Echoes in my head of all the things you said
So with 4 minutes left can you hear me saying...
This is my will God... can hear me praying...

Dear Lord Heavenly Father...
Hear my prayers of entrusting and commending
Eternal light, shine upon this broken soul of mine,
Eternal Goodness, deliver me from evil,
Eternal Power, be my support,
Eternal Wisdom, scatter the darkness of my confusion,
Eternal Pity, have mercy upon me...
That with all my heart,mind,soul and strength,
May I seek thy face
And be brought by thy infinite mercy to thy holy presence...
Embrace me God, Amen...

I got 3 minutes 3 minutes left
3 minutes until they bring me to my death
I can hear them loud and clear closer than I guessed
They don't even understand right now what this is
They don't know who I am or what I have to give
But I thank you Lord for the ability to know how to forgive
See my death has been planned so many can come to live
See I know that I got just a few minutes left
I realize now this is my end
See I wont make a sound but this love I will defend
Wrap it around my wings as I ascend
Because I stand for this love and to dillute thy sin
I came to lay my life down, and all thats within
2 minutes I'll be bound and I'll face what's ahead...


I got 1 minute 1 minute left
1 minute till they bring me to my death
As the seconds fade away
Raining tears for me on this fateful day
And who they are doesn't matter anyway...
I got no time, no time left.




Copyright © bleedthelove ... [ 2007-10-10 02:10:54]
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Re: Out Of Time. (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 06:45:35 AM AEST
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wow this is so heartfelt and amazing.. its beautiful artwork here.. lovely as usual from you awesome writing!!

rock on,

vampyress Jenni


Re: Out Of Time. (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Wednesday, 10th October 2007 @ 06:57:54 AM AEST
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Reminds me of a scene from the movie Dancer in the Dark where Bjork sings the song "107 Steps"... the countdown to death... what a strange feeling that must be. Love the work, thanks!

~Adreana




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