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Promises????...

Contributed by brew on Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 12:02:23 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Life: Does it bring what most hope for..?
It brings some happiness
Some peace
Some joy
Some saddness
SO why can it not bring....All?
A combination of all that is seeked
We know it can not be perfect
We know it won't be subtle
But:
It can be something in a happy medium
It has lesser
It has more
It can be torn
It can be tossed
it is life

So give what another wishes




HOPE




Copyright © brew ... [ 2007-10-03 12:02:23]
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Re: Promises????... (User Rating: 1 )
by lost_chadow on Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 12:53:33 PM AEST
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I think life's supposed to supply a full range of emotions. You feel angry, happy, sad, loved, rejected, hated, admired. It seems like so much to cram into one person but without all of it you'd kinda be an incomplete person...I like this one; it feels like a real conversation, as if you're right here talking to me.


Re: Promises????... (User Rating: 1 )
by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 01:22:16 PM AEST
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YOU WERE IN AN ODD MOOD TONIGHT I WILL HAVE TO SAY THAT BUT "HOPE" IS SOMETHING WE ALL WANT WISH I WOULD HAVE SAVED WHAT I WROTE ABOUT IT BUT OF COURSE I DIDN'T LOL AT LEAST YOU READ IT THOUGH


SCOTT


Re: Promises????... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th October 2007 @ 02:51:00 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem, a question of the heart that
questions life itself, well done once again.


((((Dana))))


Ben


Re: Promises????... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 04:47:22 AM AEST
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Up 'n' down 'n' all around ---
life is a dance. Ya said it yerself here in a little different wording. Nice wording, I might add.

Peace 'n' hope to ya, Brew,

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy




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