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Array ( [sid] => 13764 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => whos laughing now??? [time] => 2003-03-05 13:00:00 [hometext] => this poem makes me sooooooooooooooooooooooo happy. HAHAHHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! [bodytext] => first im going to tie you up,
next ill torture you,
then ill cut you,
then ill mock you and make fun of you to your face,
then ill hit you in the head with a baseball bat,
then ill cut chunks out of your flesh,
then when the time is right ill wake you up and let you see,
then ill send you to the hell where you belong,
then ill skin your dead body and whare your skin around my house,
then ill sing and dance with your dead body,
ill make sure you never forget me,
ha thought i was a nice person then you use me and then leave me out in the cold,
ha youll never forget me, im the one you told not to call,
im the one who killed you,
im the one who enjoyd every bit of it,
and i am the one of us that is still alive. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 372 [topic] => 43 [informant] => steamsaint [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

whos laughing now???

Contributed by steamsaint on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

first im going to tie you up,
next ill torture you,
then ill cut you,
then ill mock you and make fun of you to your face,
then ill hit you in the head with a baseball bat,
then ill cut chunks out of your flesh,
then when the time is right ill wake you up and let you see,
then ill send you to the hell where you belong,
then ill skin your dead body and whare your skin around my house,
then ill sing and dance with your dead body,
ill make sure you never forget me,
ha thought i was a nice person then you use me and then leave me out in the cold,
ha youll never forget me, im the one you told not to call,
im the one who killed you,
im the one who enjoyd every bit of it,
and i am the one of us that is still alive.

Copyright © steamsaint ... [ 2003-03-05 13:00:00]
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Re: whos laughing now??? (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:22:49 PM AEST
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i dont think anyone is laughing now, wat u did is not funny :S

Re: whos laughing now??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:47:47 PM AEST
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Haha i think it's funny...but i didn't take it so seriously...there's a few people in this world i'd like to kill...but there's this whole going to hell thing...lol...great write...

Re: whos laughing now??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:32:07 PM AEST
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This is sick... yet it is funny. I'd love to do all that to a couple people I know... hehe...

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