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The pain shifts from left to right
Then settles between the horrors I've sought to condemn

Gentle satisfaction erodes my troubles
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

Doubt sinks its claws into my unyielding vertebra
A new layer of grey blurs my vision
You always seem to find a way to aggrivate the senses
Becoming the rash ***ing my psychosis

Aching in the back of my mental weakness
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

Lying on the floor,
Flipping through cold concepts,
I discard them all

Something dies in me,
A smile cracks under torn flesh,
I reverse my fall

I abhor you all
I abhor you all

Gentle satisfaction erodes my troubles
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

Aching in the back of my mental weakness
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

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Fresh Malevolence

Contributed by wretched_reflections on Tuesday, 2nd October 2007 @ 08:54:41 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

A moment of pure bliss scrapes the air clean of hate's first kiss
The pain shifts from left to right
Then settles between the horrors I've sought to condemn

Gentle satisfaction erodes my troubles
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

Doubt sinks its claws into my unyielding vertebra
A new layer of grey blurs my vision
You always seem to find a way to aggrivate the senses
Becoming the rash ***ing my psychosis

Aching in the back of my mental weakness
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

Lying on the floor,
Flipping through cold concepts,
I discard them all

Something dies in me,
A smile cracks under torn flesh,
I reverse my fall

I abhor you all
I abhor you all

Gentle satisfaction erodes my troubles
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

Aching in the back of my mental weakness
Yet the malevolence keeps momentum
Onwards towards oblivion

I abhor you all

Copyright © wretched_reflections ... [ 2007-10-02 08:54:41]
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Re: Fresh Malevolence (User Rating: 1 )
by Cupid on Tuesday, 2nd October 2007 @ 10:34:20 AM AEST
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Wow, WR!
This amazing!
Yes, I have felt this way a lot. It kind of hurts doesn't it?
Remember, we all struggle sometimes.
And some of us struggle ALL of the time.
But it does not mean that things won't improve.
Never lose hope, WR!
I know what ails you.
And if you need people to talk to, you can always count on us at YPDC.
Cheers, friend. : )

Re: Fresh Malevolence (User Rating: 1 )
by Adreana on Wednesday, 3rd October 2007 @ 05:09:01 AM AEST
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"Something dies in me,
A smile cracks under torn flesh,
I reverse my fall"

What a strong stanza. Bravo on this one, good buddy.

~Adreana

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