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Array ( [sid] => 137599 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => what's to say [time] => 2007-10-01 10:09:51 [hometext] => Violent Femmes in the back ground [bodytext] => If I had some words to keep you by my side, If I had the time to say them right, I would be more honorable to keep them in, and not say them yesterday or tonight. If it was up to me you would be right, not just right now but even when you are wrong. But you're not the one, you tell me, I write it in a song, i sing it although the rythem doesn't stay along. It sounds fine when I sing it, I am wrong, I am wrong, my love is gone.
If I had an hour to hold you by myside, it wouldn't change a thing, the truth is I love you, but I am not the only one.
You are beautiful, young and never happy, I'm in turmoil, just trying to go on- with my own life.
it's so crazy that I feel, never made sense to me, so I tell, you're not the one, not the one for me.
I was stupid for the things I said and did not reply, I was wrong but that only sounds good when you sing along.
If I had anything right here inside, I never would of said, I never should of said I love you.
I was wrong, I was wrong, all my love is gone.
If I had just one song to give to you, just one
it is my love is gone, my love is gone, my love has gone away [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 43 [informant] => rhei76 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
what's to say

Contributed by rhei76 on Monday, 1st October 2007 @ 10:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



If I had some words to keep you by my side, If I had the time to say them right, I would be more honorable to keep them in, and not say them yesterday or tonight. If it was up to me you would be right, not just right now but even when you are wrong. But you're not the one, you tell me, I write it in a song, i sing it although the rythem doesn't stay along. It sounds fine when I sing it, I am wrong, I am wrong, my love is gone.
If I had an hour to hold you by myside, it wouldn't change a thing, the truth is I love you, but I am not the only one.
You are beautiful, young and never happy, I'm in turmoil, just trying to go on- with my own life.
it's so crazy that I feel, never made sense to me, so I tell, you're not the one, not the one for me.
I was stupid for the things I said and did not reply, I was wrong but that only sounds good when you sing along.
If I had anything right here inside, I never would of said, I never should of said I love you.
I was wrong, I was wrong, all my love is gone.
If I had just one song to give to you, just one
it is my love is gone, my love is gone, my love has gone away




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Re: what's to say (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 1st October 2007 @ 12:57:43 PM AEST
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A bit sad but beautifully written, my friend.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy


Re: what's to say (User Rating: 1 )
by runawaynameless on Tuesday, 2nd October 2007 @ 08:59:30 AM AEST
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I love you eric... even if it was sad, and I know what you are saying... I wish I didnt, and I wish you werent going through all this...




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