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Array ( [sid] => 137571 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => In A Burning Confusion [time] => 2007-09-29 23:07:46 [hometext] => A friends Tormented love affair [bodytext] => Nobody told her
that she should be stronger
so she endured emotional torture
from a man made of stone,
Exsisting in silence
in a routine of violence
the cycle can not be broken
it is the only life that she knows.

Blindly she follows
where ever he leads her
on the outside she is smiling
but inside
she is silently screaming,
The stench of a lifetime
filled with pain and hurt
he's concealing
but she is so distracted
she can't see the clues he's been revealing.

In a burning confusion
to be released she desires
but she can't hold on
with hands made of clay.

When she is Searching for reasons
or something real to believe in
he distorts her vision
with a illusions that last,
when somebody finally told her
that love should not be torture
she was so deep into disorder
that all she could do was laugh.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 48 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

In A Burning Confusion

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 29th September 2007 @ 11:07:46 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Nobody told her
that she should be stronger
so she endured emotional torture
from a man made of stone,
Exsisting in silence
in a routine of violence
the cycle can not be broken
it is the only life that she knows.

Blindly she follows
where ever he leads her
on the outside she is smiling
but inside
she is silently screaming,
The stench of a lifetime
filled with pain and hurt
he's concealing
but she is so distracted
she can't see the clues he's been revealing.

In a burning confusion
to be released she desires
but she can't hold on
with hands made of clay.

When she is Searching for reasons
or something real to believe in
he distorts her vision
with a illusions that last,
when somebody finally told her
that love should not be torture
she was so deep into disorder
that all she could do was laugh.

Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2007-09-29 23:07:46]
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Re: In A Burning Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 02:43:49 AM AEST
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This is a sad and tormented reality for many women that most certainly leaves them confused as to what the real meaning of love is. This is an important subject ,and I thank you for addressing it in such a well written way.

God bless.

Re: In A Burning Confusion (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 30th September 2007 @ 12:02:47 PM AEST
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I can relate to this write in many ways but thank God for helping me to find my way out.
Once I got out of the last relationship of mental torture I vowed to myself, Never Again!
It was then then that I started searching for me.
That's been close to ten years now.
Incredible write.
He tried so hard to take me down with him but when it came to my soul he couldn't touch that as Jesus protects my soul.
Awesome work and understanding.
Big luv, huggs,
emy

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