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Array ( [sid] => 13752 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => ??? [time] => 2003-03-05 07:00:00 [hometext] => this is one of the few free verse poems i've written.... it's slightly odd, but read it and see how you take it... i'm not sure what to call it... if you would, let me know what you think... thanks! [bodytext] => i’ve wasted my time
with you floating through my mind
i’m tired of putting on this smile
pretending there’s nothing left
i’ve tried to stop feeling this feeling
but you were always good at making me fall
and I was always good at falling fast
now I wish that you’d push me over the edge
make me fall again
catch me in your arms this time
seems anymore I crash into the ground
over and over, time after time
you could give me wings to fly
but trusting in you is like asking to die
and i’d rather die than live alone
i need your arms around me
we both know we’ve crashed
we’re buried in the rubble
but we can’t set each other free again, not anymore
and you can’t say that you don’t care
i can see it all within your stare
you know we both feel the same
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 311 [topic] => 22 [informant] => ktbugg [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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Contributed by ktbugg on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



i’ve wasted my time
with you floating through my mind
i’m tired of putting on this smile
pretending there’s nothing left
i’ve tried to stop feeling this feeling
but you were always good at making me fall
and I was always good at falling fast
now I wish that you’d push me over the edge
make me fall again
catch me in your arms this time
seems anymore I crash into the ground
over and over, time after time
you could give me wings to fly
but trusting in you is like asking to die
and i’d rather die than live alone
i need your arms around me
we both know we’ve crashed
we’re buried in the rubble
but we can’t set each other free again, not anymore
and you can’t say that you don’t care
i can see it all within your stare
you know we both feel the same




Copyright © ktbugg ... [ 2003-03-05 07:00:00]
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Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by springchic1979 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:07:08 AM AEST
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I read your poem and thought it was great!
There were 2 lines I came across that really caught my attention:

but trusting in you is like asking to die
and i’d rather die than live alone

Amazingly well put! *applaud*

Yvonne


Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:50:39 PM AEST
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beautiful...


Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by TypenLutschen on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:06:30 PM AEST
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sigh.... someone's a writer.


Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by TypenLutschen on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:06:33 PM AEST
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sigh.... someone's a writer.


Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:53:26 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Great job!!


Re: ??? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:46:01 PM AEST
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i liked this poem seems like you were putting your faith and love in someone who always dragged you down? *sighs* I've done that before and it left me feeling worthless and dirty. Great poem you are able to get your feelings across clearly.

Bobo (Joel)




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