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Array ( [sid] => 13748 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => confused [time] => 2003-03-05 05:00:00 [hometext] => This poem was written on March 3, 2003.
I wrote this poem cuz i was just thinkin about sum things that i had gone through with my last relationahip. [bodytext] => “Confused”

So confused in my own words,
So confused in yours too
I don’t understand any of it,
I don’t believe it’s true.

Why did it happen this way?
We could have solved it all,
but ever since it was over
everything came to a fall.

Being friends would be cool,
Having you to hold would be great
but that isn’t going to happen
for it was my heart you had to break.

I want to go crazy
But I know it’s not right
I just want to hear your voice
or for you to be in my sight.

I try to talk to you
but you don’t care to listen
I don’t understand you
Why won’t you just listen?

I don’t understand
Why do you have to be an ass?
it’s so crazy
but it’s all in the past.


I wish I could tell you how I feel
But you don’t care to listen to me
you don’t care at all anymore
so I guess this is how it has to be.

I have to tell you goodbye
I have to leave you be,
but always remember
you’ll always be loved by me.
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confused

Contributed by nikkie on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 05:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



“Confused”

So confused in my own words,
So confused in yours too
I don’t understand any of it,
I don’t believe it’s true.

Why did it happen this way?
We could have solved it all,
but ever since it was over
everything came to a fall.

Being friends would be cool,
Having you to hold would be great
but that isn’t going to happen
for it was my heart you had to break.

I want to go crazy
But I know it’s not right
I just want to hear your voice
or for you to be in my sight.

I try to talk to you
but you don’t care to listen
I don’t understand you
Why won’t you just listen?

I don’t understand
Why do you have to be an ass?
it’s so crazy
but it’s all in the past.


I wish I could tell you how I feel
But you don’t care to listen to me
you don’t care at all anymore
so I guess this is how it has to be.

I have to tell you goodbye
I have to leave you be,
but always remember
you’ll always be loved by me.




Copyright © nikkie ... [ 2003-03-05 05:00:00]
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Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 08:35:43 AM AEST
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Very sweet poem. I like the way it all comes together.


Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:43:36 PM AEST
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awww, sad, but well done poem, hope your feeling better, and again, big welcome to the site, huggs always nessa


Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 11:36:11 AM AEST
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nikkie, i know this one... and it's good ... don't stop writing sis.


Re: confused (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 08:38:19 PM AEST
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Why be confused if "He" won't listen? Let him be, as you said. He'll realize , on day, he's made a big mistake by not listening to you. He'll regret it all, but you shouldn't. You've done your best...... (Luh ya NiNik lol)


Re: confused (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Sunday, 11th May 2003 @ 06:45:24 PM AEST
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very good poem Nikkie

Lindsey




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