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Array ( [sid] => 137477 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => tonight i beg [time] => 2007-09-24 04:16:30 [hometext] => [bodytext] => all you want
is my pain
all you want
is my sorrow
all you want
is me to beg
well for you to know
i am in pain
well for you to know
i am in sorrow
well for you to know
i have been begging
now youll sleep
tonight youll sleep
tonight ill cry
tonight ill drink
tonight ill cry
tonight ill drink
tonight ill think
tonight ill wish i could be
beside you tonight ill wish
that i could wake up beside you
i love you and im hurting
but thats what you want
so ill let you trun it around
ill beg for you back
so you can throw me away
ill beg for you back so you can be the one
the one to end this nightmare
ill beg ill cry ill drink ill live in sorrow
so you dont have to hurt
this is my last plea for your love
this is me asking for one more chance
just so you can say goodbye
just so you can say i dont love you
please give me another chance
i hope you say no casue i cant live like this
so tell me i dont love you one last time [comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 22 [informant] => 10_000days [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

tonight i beg

Contributed by 10_000days on Monday, 24th September 2007 @ 04:16:30 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

all you want
is my pain
all you want
is my sorrow
all you want
is me to beg
well for you to know
i am in pain
well for you to know
i am in sorrow
well for you to know
i have been begging
now youll sleep
tonight youll sleep
tonight ill cry
tonight ill drink
tonight ill cry
tonight ill drink
tonight ill think
tonight ill wish i could be
beside you tonight ill wish
that i could wake up beside you
i love you and im hurting
but thats what you want
so ill let you trun it around
ill beg for you back
so you can throw me away
ill beg for you back so you can be the one
the one to end this nightmare
ill beg ill cry ill drink ill live in sorrow
so you dont have to hurt
this is my last plea for your love
this is me asking for one more chance
just so you can say goodbye
just so you can say i dont love you
please give me another chance
i hope you say no casue i cant live like this
so tell me i dont love you one last time

Copyright © 10_000days ... [ 2007-09-24 04:16:30]
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Re: tonight i beg (User Rating: 1 )
by 10_000days on Monday, 24th September 2007 @ 04:45:51 AM AEST
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revised version

all you want
is all my pain
all you want
is all my sorrow
all you want
is me to beg
well for you to know
i am in pain
well for you to know
i am in sorrow
well for you to know
i just begged
and now youll sleep
tonight ill cry
tonight ill drink alone
tonight ill cry
and drink alone
tonight ill think.
ill wish that i could be with you,
beside you.
tonight ill wish,
i could wake up with you,
i do love you and i yes i hurt.
but thats what you want,
for me to hurt.
so ill let you trun,
it all around,
ill beg for you.
just so you, can get the chance, to tear me down.
ill beg for you.
so you can be
the one to end.
to end this dream i named fear.
ill beg ill cry ill drink for you ill live in sorrow, just for you,
so you can sleep.
this is my plea,
for your love.
this is me,
begging.
for one more chance.
just so you can say goodbye,
please give me just this one chance.
to be just your friend.
i hope you say no,
i cant live like this.
so tell me now, that
i dont love you.
just say it one last time.

and so i fall and let go of all my dignity just for you girl as your read this i want you to tell
me that i dont love you.

i just threw myself on the ground i just let myself burn i just gave up what was left of my dignety
tell me i dont love you.

Re: tonight i beg (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Sunday, 7th October 2007 @ 12:11:00 PM AEST
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hope she is worth the begging,
love hurts,,
Love is can be found
but sometimes it can be found in wrong places and thoughts

Man, I see and fel the hurt in the words wrote here
Hope it works
Im female, and yeah we can as well as the male specis, can hurt

brew~

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