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Array ( [sid] => 13747 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Our Weekend [time] => 2003-03-05 04:30:00 [hometext] => The beginning of easily the best days of my life!:-) [bodytext] => Never shall I forget
That Friday evening
Walking into my local pub
My eyes suddenly fixated
Oh my God!

The exact embodiment
Of all my lifelong dreams
My idea of perfection!

In love I plummeted
With you my Josephine
My Delilah
My Cleopatara
My lively Carmen
My love.

In a flash we were walking
Together side by side
I told you there
Anything I would do for you!

Thinking maybe foolish
Was I too sudden, too early?

But that Monday Afternoon
You walked out through those doors
And standing before me
You put my mind so at ease
Like nobody else had or will.

Then I knew for definite
Forever it would be You!

Not since has another
Made it past my eyes!

All I see is your image
My ears hear only your voice
My nose longs for your hair
My hands have each other
But feel so alone.

Where are you now my Love?

Where? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 288 [topic] => 24 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Our Weekend

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 04:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Never shall I forget
That Friday evening
Walking into my local pub
My eyes suddenly fixated
Oh my God!

The exact embodiment
Of all my lifelong dreams
My idea of perfection!

In love I plummeted
With you my Josephine
My Delilah
My Cleopatara
My lively Carmen
My love.

In a flash we were walking
Together side by side
I told you there
Anything I would do for you!

Thinking maybe foolish
Was I too sudden, too early?

But that Monday Afternoon
You walked out through those doors
And standing before me
You put my mind so at ease
Like nobody else had or will.

Then I knew for definite
Forever it would be You!

Not since has another
Made it past my eyes!

All I see is your image
My ears hear only your voice
My nose longs for your hair
My hands have each other
But feel so alone.

Where are you now my Love?

Where?




Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2003-03-05 04:30:00]
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Re: Our Weekend (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 06:36:13 AM AEST
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Nice write, Dean.. Hope you find her...
Jenni


Re: Our Weekend (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:36:24 AM AEST
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Good one Dean,one day she will be at your finger tips! Christina


Re: Our Weekend (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 10:12:43 PM AEST
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Dean, this one is very beautiful. I am sure that one day you will find her. Or possibly some one else. I really enjoyed this one, it is great.
ShadowsCloud


Re: Our Weekend (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 06:52:40 PM AEST
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Beuatiful write! I hope you see her again

mckayla


Re: Our Weekend (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 10:12:48 AM AEST
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very sweet. i hope you find your love.


Re: Our Weekend (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 16th March 2003 @ 06:13:07 AM AEST
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if it were only that easy but it never feckin is




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