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Array ( [sid] => 137442 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Incarcerated [time] => 2007-09-22 04:38:33 [hometext] => Playing with words here... [bodytext] => So true, the saw of parting is such a sorrow
No joy in seperation where longing was born
Unwilling and circumspect finds aching breast
Mind and heart doubt the veracity of sweet

Agonies wrought in future emptiness too real
The sick hollow masks the eyes from all color
Everything grows cold, gray and almost lifeless
I dare you to enlighten, where is the sweetness

All too soon, nothing is to be found but cloying palor
Shells of afterthought wishes, sad rememberances
Dreaming perhaps there may be the hope of return
Glimmers of renewed embrace provide saccarine escape

Will the desire for revival of pleasant reveries negate
Are tired shadows scattered with wistful aspirations
Credibility seems contrived while consumed by flagging faith
Moments of honey imprisoned within departure's dungeon [comments] => 6 [counter] => 299 [topic] => 52 [informant] => reprobate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Incarcerated

Contributed by reprobate on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:38:33 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

So true, the saw of parting is such a sorrow
No joy in seperation where longing was born
Unwilling and circumspect finds aching breast
Mind and heart doubt the veracity of sweet

Agonies wrought in future emptiness too real
The sick hollow masks the eyes from all color
Everything grows cold, gray and almost lifeless
I dare you to enlighten, where is the sweetness

All too soon, nothing is to be found but cloying palor
Shells of afterthought wishes, sad rememberances
Dreaming perhaps there may be the hope of return
Glimmers of renewed embrace provide saccarine escape

Will the desire for revival of pleasant reveries negate
Are tired shadows scattered with wistful aspirations
Credibility seems contrived while consumed by flagging faith
Moments of honey imprisoned within departure's dungeon

Copyright © reprobate ... [ 2007-09-22 04:38:33]
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Re: Incarcerated (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 05:11:11 AM AEST
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Nice wordplay!
I especially love that last line!

Re: Incarcerated (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 02:10:08 PM AEST
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Hmmm You played these words well, my friend. Sadness, bittersweet sadness filled me whilst reading this incredible write. The third stanza I found very moving. Thanks for sharing.
Peace and hugs,
Laura

Re: Incarcerated (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd September 2007 @ 04:15:15 PM AEST
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Well just keep on playing 'cause this is great.
Big huggs,
emy

Re: Incarcerated (User Rating: 1 )
by lukiest1 on Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 02:27:29 AM AEST
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u hav a vry nyce way w/ wordz & i absolootly luvb ur stuff, keep up da gr8 werk

Re: Incarcerated (User Rating: 1 )
by drkness_awts_as_lvrs_hate on Sunday, 23rd September 2007 @ 03:08:56 PM AEST
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HAD TO LOOK UP CLOYING PALOR BUT AFTER THAT I LIKED IT

SCOTT

Re: Incarcerated (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 30th May 2014 @ 12:29:34 PM AEST
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wow! truly a masterpiece here, it is perfectly
penned, the depth beautiful, you never fail my
friend, your poem as all your poetry flows, this
one shines:)

hugs n' love nessa

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