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Array ( [sid] => 13744 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one morning sunrise [time] => 2003-03-05 00:40:00 [hometext] => ~nature poetry~ [bodytext] =>

now first light of day

the sun comes up slowly, far high in the sky

the mountain speaks softly and tells me why,

this sky streaked with pinks and blues in haste

for this colour inspires life, gives a lovely taste,

with thoughts of my life touching endless time

clever nature brings words to me, and rhymes,

as one only needs to be open to see and hear it

i see this beauty and simply want to share it,

it is so brilliant up here in the morning mountains

the gentle breezes blow freely and never complain,

as the sun comes further in, and the mists take flight

full morning explodes and away goes the night,

and the sky changes to brighter and deeper shades

the blue beauty takes any pain away, it begins to fade,

so massive and wonderfully extreme is nature

and these morning sunrises will always endure,

the sun full up lovely, far high in the sky, whereas

the mountain still speaks softly, time at an impasse,

now full bright the day

~*~

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one morning sunrise

Contributed by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: PoemsonBeauty

now first light of day

the sun comes up slowly, far high in the sky

the mountain speaks softly and tells me why,

this sky streaked with pinks and blues in haste

for this colour inspires life, gives a lovely taste,

with thoughts of my life touching endless time

clever nature brings words to me, and rhymes,

as one only needs to be open to see and hear it

i see this beauty and simply want to share it,

it is so brilliant up here in the morning mountains

the gentle breezes blow freely and never complain,

as the sun comes further in, and the mists take flight

full morning explodes and away goes the night,

and the sky changes to brighter and deeper shades

the blue beauty takes any pain away, it begins to fade,

so massive and wonderfully extreme is nature

and these morning sunrises will always endure,

the sun full up lovely, far high in the sky, whereas

the mountain still speaks softly, time at an impasse,

now full bright the day

~*~

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-03-05 00:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 01:57:48 AM AEST
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It is like a bright and beautiful painting. soo sweet and beautiful writing... venkat

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:51:20 AM AEST
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I've said it before - you are so lucky to live where you live .. I envy you your beautiful mountain ... lovely poem Nessa.

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 11:40:25 AM AEST
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What a beautiful picture you have painted with your words! I loved this! Christina

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:04:41 PM AEST
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this is gorgeous

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:32:47 PM AEST
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ah, some excellent imagery Vanessa your poems are always beautiful though. So the genre Poems on Beauty is kind of redundant (I think thats the right word) anways great poem!

Your friend,
Joel

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 04:47:02 AM AEST
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In this maze of beauity in witch you write, I'm lost in this place, thanks for shareing this lovely write, I'm at a lost of words.

The Phantom

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 05:47:17 PM AEST
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i can see what you're talking about ... thank you for sharing such beauty

Re: one morning sunrise (User Rating: 1 )
by banjo on Thursday, 27th March 2003 @ 03:24:47 PM AEST
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I love the beginning and ending line. The middle lacks focus. Sharpen!

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