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since I've see your face, held you, kissed you.
I read that conversation and find it hard to believe
that none of it was the truth
but how could you have forgotten me so easily
I can't seem to let you go
Even though you don't deserve me.
I keep telling myself that you're shady
but it's hard to forget that look in your eyes... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 22 [informant] => broken_cookie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The Look In Your Eyes.

Contributed by broken_cookie on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 06:52:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It's been a month
since I've see your face, held you, kissed you.
I read that conversation and find it hard to believe
that none of it was the truth
but how could you have forgotten me so easily
I can't seem to let you go
Even though you don't deserve me.
I keep telling myself that you're shady
but it's hard to forget that look in your eyes...

Copyright © broken_cookie ... [ 2007-09-21 06:52:18]
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Re: The Look In Your Eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 11:51:32 AM AEST
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Hard hitting write, you always strike a chord with these. Nicely done. The ending is haunting yes the look in the eyes.. sometimes that is something we never forget believe me....

hug
Michelle

Re: The Look In Your Eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 12:19:43 PM AEST
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Please, please never apologize for spilling what needs spilled. Write, my poetic friend, write away. I find writing to be one of the best ways to heal from the pain and cruelness of other inconsiderate humans who happen to roam this Earth of ours. Being hurt by someone who you thought loved you is just damn painful. Keep writing.
I wish you peace,
Laura

Re: The Look In Your Eyes. (User Rating: 1 )
by fadingaway on Friday, 21st September 2007 @ 12:54:28 PM AEST
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a emotional write...this hits really close to home with me. I know what it's like because i've been there before. keep writing.
milo

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