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Array ( [sid] => 13742 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Fade [time] => 2003-03-05 00:00:00 [hometext] => What can I say, I've been feeling weird lately. [bodytext] => I'm so tormented by these sinister thoughts
I think I need you to save me from myself
I want to feel like I'm flying
Just so I can fall
I'm drowning at the hands of my very soul
But can you see me choking on my own breath?
It makes me want to just let go
Baby close your eyes
So I can cry
And pray that you can make me stop feeling this way

I don't want to be what you think is beautiful
I cut to bleed to be more imperfect
I want to know if you would think
I was beautiful then
My every flaw is everything I revel in
To love me you've got to love every single fault
I need you there when I break down
When the truth hits me
Of what I've become
In order to eventually be happy

If it seems like I'm dying, I'll be okay
This is what I need right now to be free
The pain is part of who I am
And I love the pain
I couldn't live without the hurt you cause me
But it feels so strange when you make me happy
If I hide will you come find me?
Why I act this way
Is 'cause I'm unsure
And I need you so desperately to be my saviour

Don't try to help me yet, I'm still falling down
Nothing is over until I hit bottom
I'll try to smile when I'm at your side
So you don't worry
This is about me and there's no place for you yet
I need to lose my mind just once before I die
I love you so much that it hurts
And you're the cure
All I put you through
Is my way of making sure you'll be there when the light fades [comments] => 6 [counter] => 230 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Fade

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I'm so tormented by these sinister thoughts
I think I need you to save me from myself
I want to feel like I'm flying
Just so I can fall
I'm drowning at the hands of my very soul
But can you see me choking on my own breath?
It makes me want to just let go
Baby close your eyes
So I can cry
And pray that you can make me stop feeling this way

I don't want to be what you think is beautiful
I cut to bleed to be more imperfect
I want to know if you would think
I was beautiful then
My every flaw is everything I revel in
To love me you've got to love every single fault
I need you there when I break down
When the truth hits me
Of what I've become
In order to eventually be happy

If it seems like I'm dying, I'll be okay
This is what I need right now to be free
The pain is part of who I am
And I love the pain
I couldn't live without the hurt you cause me
But it feels so strange when you make me happy
If I hide will you come find me?
Why I act this way
Is 'cause I'm unsure
And I need you so desperately to be my saviour

Don't try to help me yet, I'm still falling down
Nothing is over until I hit bottom
I'll try to smile when I'm at your side
So you don't worry
This is about me and there's no place for you yet
I need to lose my mind just once before I die
I love you so much that it hurts
And you're the cure
All I put you through
Is my way of making sure you'll be there when the light fades




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-03-05 00:00:00]
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Re: Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:58:19 AM AEST
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First off Great write, There is something about this poem that catchem my eye, and I don't know quite what it is. my first thoughts are that you feel this way, or or you soon will, and a way to get over it and make you happy is for that someone to be there for you, in the time that you need them most. this is what I got out of it, if you have differend meanings let me know, to better understand your poem
~MetalMouth666 (Ryan)


Re: Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by exiled on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 04:01:59 AM AEST
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i really really like this. and something i got out of it is that maybe im not sure but are you afraid if you do these things that this person wont be there.

exiled.


Re: Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:59:58 PM AEST
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this is amazing...a beautiful poem...i love it...incredible...


Re: Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by TypenLutschen on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 03:03:35 PM AEST
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WOW. WOW. I really relate to this poem. I was like "Didn't I write something like this?!" I think it's really thoughtful and beautifully detailed.


Re: Fade (User Rating: 1 )
by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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    Dude, you've got some serious problems. Go see a shrik! lol.... This is a weird poem. Probably the most emotional poem I've ever read. I, being the stupidhead I am, don't really see what you're trying to say, but I do get a feeling of unhappiness.

    Anywho, this was great. Haven't read a poem this good in, like, well, a while.......lol.

    Love always,
    Em


    Re: Fade (User Rating: 1 )
    by Emmie74 on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 07:38:18 PM AEST
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    **shrink**.....lol.....So I'm not the greatest speller.......... :P




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