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Array ( [sid] => 137411 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How could you [time] => 2007-09-20 16:21:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => There's darkness all around me
I scream your name, but no answer
I hear movement in the distance
I run over hoping it was you
As soon as I get there
Someone takes me by the arm
telling me not to go over there....
I start screaming your name
at the top of my lungs
As I'm screaming for you
this guy is telling me to stop
I fianl break free from his death grip
I run over to see if you are ok
but when I get to you
I see you on top of this guy
beating him to his death
I try to get you to stop
But you just keep beating him
I final got a hold of you
But when I did you
turned around and pushed me off
As I'm falling to the ground
I think to myself this isn't him
So I tired one more time
When I did, you looked at me
With so much hate in your eyes
You tell me to back off
But I couldn't
So I tired agian
instead of you pushing me
you punched me in the face
At the moment I know there
was no way I could be around you
I just didn't think my loving
brother could do that to his sister
[comments] => 0 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 23 [informant] => whiskybear [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
How could you

Contributed by whiskybear on Thursday, 20th September 2007 @ 04:21:16 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



There's darkness all around me
I scream your name, but no answer
I hear movement in the distance
I run over hoping it was you
As soon as I get there
Someone takes me by the arm
telling me not to go over there....
I start screaming your name
at the top of my lungs
As I'm screaming for you
this guy is telling me to stop
I fianl break free from his death grip
I run over to see if you are ok
but when I get to you
I see you on top of this guy
beating him to his death
I try to get you to stop
But you just keep beating him
I final got a hold of you
But when I did you
turned around and pushed me off
As I'm falling to the ground
I think to myself this isn't him
So I tired one more time
When I did, you looked at me
With so much hate in your eyes
You tell me to back off
But I couldn't
So I tired agian
instead of you pushing me
you punched me in the face
At the moment I know there
was no way I could be around you
I just didn't think my loving
brother could do that to his sister




Copyright © whiskybear ... [ 2007-09-20 16:21:16]
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