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[sid] => 137294
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => Chains part 2 chains like lies
[time] => 2007-09-14 02:57:41
[hometext] => Chains part 2 chains like lies
[bodytext] => Now you’re gone. I can’t escape, Your chains still wrapped- Your lies alive. The truth denied. Your love it blinds. The hope of truth, as fake as binds. The love that holds me here. Old rusty chains. I want the lies I want the Pain. I want your chains, To hold me tight. part 2 of my last poem the whole chain metiphor things got me it works so good at expressing how i feel its a nice escape from the endless strugle inside i tryed to work on punctuation this time i think i got it prety good. but i dunno second opinion would be greate [comments] => 1 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 22 [informant] => 10_000days [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
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