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Array ( [sid] => 13726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => here's my shoulder [time] => 2003-03-04 18:40:00 [hometext] => *huggs* [bodytext] => for all those times you think you want to break down,
but hang on and smile to those around you without a frown,
here's my shoulder,
for all the days that seemed so bright, which started happy,
then worries came around and it turned out crappy,
here's my shoulder,
for all those nights filled with endless dreams,
that are more like nightmares and night stallions it seems,
here's my shoulder,
just lay your head right here, and try to smile,
i'll keep you safe from all these things for a while,
and give you a big hugg,

right on my shoulder, yeah that's right,
and let my loving arms hold you tight,
just lay back your head,

when your heart is heavy and you just want to sit,
come sit by me and we'll be peaceful for a bit,
and give a little sigh,
'cause my shoulder's always free,
it is attached to the love in me,
and no matter what you do,
i'll always be there to get you through,
'cause my friend i love you.
~*~
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here's my shoulder

Contributed by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

for all those times you think you want to break down,
but hang on and smile to those around you without a frown,
here's my shoulder,
for all the days that seemed so bright, which started happy,
then worries came around and it turned out crappy,
here's my shoulder,
for all those nights filled with endless dreams,
that are more like nightmares and night stallions it seems,
here's my shoulder,
just lay your head right here, and try to smile,
i'll keep you safe from all these things for a while,
and give you a big hugg,

right on my shoulder, yeah that's right,
and let my loving arms hold you tight,
just lay back your head,

when your heart is heavy and you just want to sit,
come sit by me and we'll be peaceful for a bit,
and give a little sigh,
'cause my shoulder's always free,
it is attached to the love in me,
and no matter what you do,
i'll always be there to get you through,
'cause my friend i love you.
~*~

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-03-04 18:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by Sexygirl on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 06:51:59 PM AEST
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That is so very true...you must have a big shoulder to carry so much love......well done....

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 08:11:02 PM AEST
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Nessa, this was so sweet, a huge shoulder to cry on, an from a sweetie like you !!!! hugs to you !!

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 08:38:32 PM AEST
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Awww Sweetie...I know what a caring person you are..and I know that shoulder is always there for someone who needs it....
Huggs
Jenni

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:56:59 PM AEST
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Well you goy my shoulder when you need it! Great write,so very sweet to say! Christina

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 02:31:49 AM AEST
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wow! very very beautiful and very very sweet..Aww! my dear lady , you are very very liberal and noble minded..thak you for your huggs. venkat

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:01:56 PM AEST
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I loved this Vanessa, thnx for posting this. I felt as if it was written to me this was exactly what I needed to read. Great poem keep on writing and thnx for being who you are :)

Your friend,
Joel

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by Bongo on Wednesday, 12th March 2003 @ 06:17:56 AM AEST
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Nessa,
This is written with feeling, and knowing you, i know that you mean it.
Everybody needs a shoulder at some stage of their life.
You know where mine is !

Re: here's my shoulder (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 2nd September 2020 @ 11:46:36 PM AEST
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Oh wow.....
A great write..

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