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Array ( [sid] => 137254 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MENTAL HEALTH [time] => 2007-09-11 21:19:13 [hometext] => MENTAL HEALTH was written with a friend named Cobby. he wrote every second line. [bodytext] => i cant hold on, letting my grip on this world fall away
i've becomed weakened fighting to make my mental health stay
nothing no longer matters, it doesnt mean anything at all
thee all the same, thats why i put up my walls
going through life with nothing, having nothing to keep me here
right now i just wanna rip out my own eyes, darkness appear
i dont see the point anymore, i'm dead inside
i just wanna hear you scream like i have done, no more i hide
only you could make me feel, take away the numbness in my heart
but sometimes i feel like just shredding you apart
but you turn away, and i hide deeper within myself
watch me descend, loosing my mental health [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 75 [informant] => isis1987 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

MENTAL HEALTH

Contributed by isis1987 on Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 09:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

i cant hold on, letting my grip on this world fall away
i've becomed weakened fighting to make my mental health stay
nothing no longer matters, it doesnt mean anything at all
thee all the same, thats why i put up my walls
going through life with nothing, having nothing to keep me here
right now i just wanna rip out my own eyes, darkness appear
i dont see the point anymore, i'm dead inside
i just wanna hear you scream like i have done, no more i hide
only you could make me feel, take away the numbness in my heart
but sometimes i feel like just shredding you apart
but you turn away, and i hide deeper within myself
watch me descend, loosing my mental health

Copyright © isis1987 ... [ 2007-09-11 21:19:13]
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Re: MENTAL HEALTH (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 05:14:09 AM AEST
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Great cowrite!!!
Very well blended!
Watch the spelling errors as they can be a distarction...tho I should be one to talk about that!! LOL
Good job you two!

Re: MENTAL HEALTH (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 13th September 2007 @ 06:51:35 AM AEST
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very good collaberation, its obvious you two work well together. good poem also! ^^

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