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Heaven Shall Burn

Contributed by wretched_reflections on Tuesday, 11th September 2007 @ 08:51:06 AM in AEST
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This is the end of the world again - On screen the picture is perfect - Images of what we all dream - Extort your vanity - The sickness spreads as we suffocate on knowledge of ignorance - But it can't be cured - Dreams of clouds falling -The sky is crying again - What lies on the other side - Humanity is blind - Pollution stains the heavens - Whores vomiting their children - Greed, lust, apathy - The sickness spreads as we suffocate on knowledge of ignorance - But it won't be cured - Dreams of clouds falling - The sky is crying again - What lies on the other side - Humanity is blind - We are blind - But it can't be cured - I dream of days when heaven burns - And the individual specks of nothing realize their fate - To perish in the belly of creation - As you melt know that your life was completely worthless - May Andomeda feast on your screams of agony - Here's to your blissful ignorance -
May Andromeda feast on your screams of agony.

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Re: Heaven Shall Burn (User Rating: 1 )
by gribbs on Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 11:42:31 PM AEST
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wow...great reflection of many view todays society...this could be set to great headbangin' music...

Re: Heaven Shall Burn (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 05:42:05 PM AEST
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first off, shame on you for not using stanzas! =] i gave someone a 2 paragraph lecture last night in a comment about doing something like this, except they did ... at the end of every line (my eyeballs were about to explode). this poem reminded me of the band heaven shall burn because of the title and the content. if you like that band (or never heard of them) check out their music/lyrics. they are a great german metal band (they put rammstein to shame). you had some really creative lines , and i certainly am glad im not a whore vomiting any children =]. i could see these as metal lyrics easy. your lines have a lot of power, good to see someone can write forcifully around here.

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