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Can I
hold this moment
in time
Can I
keep it all to
myself
Dwell not anywhere
no....no where else

Be lost
in the moment
simply sucked
through a vortex
Standing
in one place
Looking on
to the next...

8/07
Laura Howell Horner [comments] => 8 [counter] => 317 [topic] => 64 [informant] => deadheadpoet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ambiguous )

Moments

Contributed by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 11:19:08 PM in AEST
Topic: ambiguous

Can I
hold this moment
in time
Can I
keep it all to
myself
Dwell not anywhere
no....no where else

Be lost
in the moment
simply sucked
through a vortex
Standing
in one place
Looking on
to the next...

8/07
Laura Howell Horner

Copyright © deadheadpoet ... [ 2007-09-06 23:19:08]
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Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by reprobate on Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 07:30:50 AM AEST
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If only dear lady, if only...
thank you for sharing, yet again.

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 11:47:02 AM AEST
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I swear sometimes I'm want to snatch them [right out of the air, you know... as if they were just floating there like a cloud waiting for someone to dare to just grab them] up in my hand and hold them so very, very tight so that I never have to let them go..........

Moments. yeh.

Laura, hun? To answer the question that you opened with here....

I think you just did.

~Snem
(who thinks sometimes this is the only way one can)

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 7th September 2007 @ 03:38:49 PM AEST
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Damn good here sis.... yes if for but the moment....... cant say much more for now than that..

~Michelle~

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 06:48:44 PM AEST
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short and sweeeeet, this is very well done,
so much to think about in such a short write,
thats hard to do,
and you captured the moment perfectly..

well done!!

zenith66

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th September 2007 @ 11:00:23 AM AEST
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Oh sis .. damn. This was exceptional!!

There are so many moments I would hold indefinitely, if
only we could. Experiencing this, is surely one of them.
The pic you chose to put with this is perfect.

I think you've inspired me to write .. (and THAT is a
beautiful thing; when you can inspire another with your
words, to go and seek their own. Damn, hun. I LOVE this!!)

Wonderful work. Very sigh inducing ..

peace, love and hugs

~em gee

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 04:39:57 AM AEST
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mmmmmm yeah.............
How often have we all wished this. Now all we have left is the memory.....and if we are lucky enough....a poem.

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Saturday, 15th September 2007 @ 10:41:03 PM AEST
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wow. This one sent shivers through me. Lots of profound existential thought wrapped in a pure desire of moment. Structured and worded just right.

S.

Re: Moments (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Friday, 12th October 2007 @ 04:33:57 AM AEST
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I like this . It held in its simple words how I feel today . Thanks for sharing

Whisper

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