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T0 whom not known, each is
Soon to be entwined as one
Each feels the warmth breath touch the other
Soft touches from the tips of fingers
Lightly running up and down ones body
Nothing to stop
Just continuous fate
The tingling and sensation
To feel what has never been felt
Soft whispers
Sensual thoughts
Beginning to breathe… in silence
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SOFT SHADOWS

Contributed by brew on Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 11:35:02 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

Soft shadows, caressing the silhouette of two
T0 whom not known, each is
Soon to be entwined as one
Each feels the warmth breath touch the other
Soft touches from the tips of fingers
Lightly running up and down ones body
Nothing to stop
Just continuous fate
The tingling and sensation
To feel what has never been felt
Soft whispers
Sensual thoughts
Beginning to breathe… in silence

Copyright Â© brew ... [ 2007-09-06 11:35:02]
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Re: SOFT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 01:53:34 PM AEST
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Brew,
Ahhhh this was a beautifully sweet write. Very touching and romantic. I loved the ending...

"Sensual thoughts
Beginning to breathe... in silence"

That just sounded lovely.
Thanks for sharing this fantasy.
Peace,
Laura

Re: SOFT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Thursday, 6th September 2007 @ 02:56:31 PM AEST
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That is a concept worth exploration... what if we could love as seamlessly, as gently, and as completely as two joining shadows ?

Ya got my mind turning... well done Brew.

Nazzy ~

Re: SOFT SHADOWS (User Rating: 1 )
by endlesspath on Saturday, 8th September 2007 @ 12:06:48 PM AEST
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so maybe from reading your other write, you didnt fail
just took ones heart and made, useless or maybe they didnt want what you could give
your write is wonderful and to the point of wanting another
its so hard to find one who WONT LIE or TAKE
I know I have had that happen
just stop looking
it comes
and feels wonderful

endless

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