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"Then to ask.
do you hear the silence of your soul,
as it kisses the air goodnight?"
"Will the penance of days remind you,
and have your heart lie still?"

"Will my tears wash up on the shores of time,
then help me to surrender? "
"Or lie awake in mists, and doubt,
surrendering fears that chain Us?"

"Whatever road I walk
and whatever heaven I share,
my heart will be filled with the souls of wisdom."

"Let Me lay with truth and strength,
goodness in my hands,
should I take a heart,
I will give a heart,
a measure, somewhere within."

"Then in the destiny of all souls time,
I will step into the comfort of knowing,
That life is just a moment here,
and yet an eternity in the universe of being."

"Tomorrows are just a vision,
the un-born child. What was given, or taken away?
Dress Me in forgiveness,
a mercy, where I may rest."

"Now rested I come forth again,
within a new and glorious soul.
To show once again that I am here for all time
and all of eternity." Needledancing / Crow [comments] => 5 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 19 [informant] => needledancing [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

The Dance of Souls

Contributed by needledancing on Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 05:10:03 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

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"Then to ask.
do you hear the silence of your soul,
as it kisses the air goodnight?"
"Will the penance of days remind you,
and have your heart lie still?"

"Will my tears wash up on the shores of time,
then help me to surrender? "
"Or lie awake in mists, and doubt,
surrendering fears that chain Us?"

"Whatever road I walk
and whatever heaven I share,
my heart will be filled with the souls of wisdom."

"Let Me lay with truth and strength,
goodness in my hands,
should I take a heart,
I will give a heart,
a measure, somewhere within."

"Then in the destiny of all souls time,
I will step into the comfort of knowing,
That life is just a moment here,
and yet an eternity in the universe of being."

"Tomorrows are just a vision,
the un-born child. What was given, or taken away?
Dress Me in forgiveness,
a mercy, where I may rest."

"Now rested I come forth again,
within a new and glorious soul.
To show once again that I am here for all time
and all of eternity." Needledancing / Crow

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Re: The Dance of Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 05:18:32 AM AEST
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My thanks to you Vincent for your invitation to share our words in such spontaneous and delightful thought. This was a very refreshing and warming experience for me. I hope in your travels about you see these clouds and know we have already touched them. My thanks again "Crow of the Air".Needledancing.

Re: The Dance of Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 10:48:21 AM AEST
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I have to tell you friend, what a wonderful
pleasure it was to write with you. And" I must tell you how I waited like that excited child for your notes to arrive. As word followed word it found its end, but left Me warmer and closer to a heart.
thank you so much for your open, and fresh thoughts, and sharing them with Me in this write...Vincent

Re: The Dance of Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 04:12:54 PM AEST
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Beautiful marriage of words here....you guys did well.
Peace,
Laura

Re: The Dance of Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd September 2007 @ 01:03:31 AM AEST
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Good grief! I'm so glad I logged on today, (I might have missed this!)

Damn, that picture is just so bloody poetic all on its own, without words. I love that you put it here. But,
the words you two came up with were so soft and comforting. They lift the spirit into a realm where
there is no more pain or hurt or anger or injustice. Only soft pink clouds that wrap their caress around our souls.

Damn fine writing you two. I've missed that.

*hugs*

~Breezy

Re: The Dance of Souls (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Wednesday, 5th September 2007 @ 06:23:38 AM AEST
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A beautiful collaboration of words and thoughts resulting in an extraordinary poem full of inspiration and wisdom and stunning descriptions.
Well done to both of you, a complete pleasure to read!

Dom

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