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Array ( [sid] => 137084 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => fallen men [time] => 2007-09-01 04:36:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Tears Falling
Blood Shed
Men Crawling
and Un-Fed
Missing Loved Ones
Aching Hearts
Brothers, Fathers, Sons
There All Torn Apart
Away From The World
Thier Lives Are Changed
Fallen Men Full Of Pain
Helping The World
and Risking Thier Lifes
Being Shot At
Blood on Their Knives
So Brave and So Strong
With Alot of Lost Hope
War Songs Being Played
On The Radio
Things Being Taken For Granted So Easily
No One Really Realizes Whats Happening
Were Losing More Than What We Bargined
The Brave Are Ending Up Dead
So Helplesly [comments] => 2 [counter] => 192 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Torrie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

fallen men

Contributed by Torrie on Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 04:36:29 AM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

Tears Falling
Blood Shed
Men Crawling
and Un-Fed
Missing Loved Ones
Aching Hearts
Brothers, Fathers, Sons
There All Torn Apart
Away From The World
Thier Lives Are Changed
Fallen Men Full Of Pain
Helping The World
and Risking Thier Lifes
Being Shot At
Blood on Their Knives
So Brave and So Strong
With Alot of Lost Hope
War Songs Being Played
On The Radio
Things Being Taken For Granted So Easily
No One Really Realizes Whats Happening
Were Losing More Than What We Bargined
The Brave Are Ending Up Dead
So Helplesly

Copyright © Torrie ... [ 2007-09-01 04:36:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: fallen men (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Saturday, 1st September 2007 @ 03:07:15 PM AEST
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this is really powerfull and too the point, your so right and youve expressed your view flawlessly, this is stunning, welcome to the site, im only here a few months but this is definatly a great post...

well done!!!

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Re: fallen men (User Rating: 1 )
by needledancing on Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 04:22:35 AM AEST
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Captured beautifully. War has always had its price. I wish mankind would learn there lesson soon. Excellent write my frind.

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