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Array ( [sid] => 136992 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one begins with motion thoughts or dreams [time] => 2007-08-27 06:52:16 [hometext] => ever have that feeling you were not dreaming, at all [bodytext] => One begins with motion Motion of lingering, and unreal thoughts To close their eyes and dream Dream the most extradinary dream, one could produce Not just an ordinary weightless thought, One that shatters the earth One that no other has ever felt or dreamt What would the thought be of? Could it put smiles upon faces? Could it place frowns or sadness? Not this time: This is a beautiful thought No harm or hurt All splendid hopes and silver dreams Things not another could simply imagine Soft whispers Caressing touches Eyes meeting, never looking away Warms touches of the hand Finally, the soft lips that meet Never a feel like this Never a dream like this Now all is in motion You: awake… [comments] => 7 [counter] => 313 [topic] => 40 [informant] => endlesspath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy ) one begins with motion thoughts or dreams Contributed by endlesspath on Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 06:52:16 AM in AEST Topic: fantasy One begins with motion Motion of lingering, and unreal thoughts To close their eyes and dream Dream the most extradinary dream, one could produce Not just an ordinary weightless thought, One that shatters the earth One that no other has ever felt or dreamt What would the thought be of? Could it put smiles upon faces? Could it place frowns or sadness? Not this time: This is a beautiful thought No harm or hurt All splendid hopes and silver dreams Things not another could simply imagine Soft whispers Caressing touches Eyes meeting, never looking away Warms touches of the hand Finally, the soft lips that meet Never a feel like this Never a dream like this Now all is in motion You: awake… Copyright Â© endlesspath ... [ 2007-08-27 06:52:16] (Date/Time posted on site) Advertisments: Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc. Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by zenmind on Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 08:01:47 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Wow I really enjoyed this poem. First of all, I like your rhythm and flow...I felt that each line, followed the previous, in a way that felt very fluid and natural. Your thoughts are interesting...very unique, in fact, I think that after reading this poem I have a better sense of who you are...which is a compliment. This poem feels dreamy; surreal---organic. I definitely get the sense of "motion" here. Nice job, it makes me want to read more of your work. Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by wordsy on Monday, 27th August 2007 @ 08:14:22 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) A well worded weaving my friend. as always, wordsy. Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd September 2007 @ 01:37:50 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Wonderful post endless ... pardon the expression, but it was quite dreamy ... the ending was fashioned with a cruel abruptness, just like a dream sometimes is. Well completed! Your words and flow was like an angel's voice traveling on air. Very soft and beautiful. ~Breezy Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by TeamJK on Wednesday, 26th September 2007 @ 01:04:06 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) Wow.. I was really transported by this. Amazing write. JK2 Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by Spike on Sunday, 23rd December 2007 @ 05:49:53 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) yes - definitely ethereal in quality and I love the lingering gazes... Spike Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by zenith66 on Wednesday, 2nd January 2008 @ 05:13:46 AM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) yes what a dreamlike vision of love, ive read it many times now and still love it, so many stand out lines, and a beautiful understanding of feelings(is that just wierd) anyway great post, ill read more of yours now.. Re: one begins with motion thoughts or dreams (User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on Monday, 8th December 2008 @ 06:06:00 PM AEST (User Info | Send a Message) This is an awesome write. So deep and profound!

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