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Array ( [sid] => 136977 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Stick to me [time] => 2007-08-26 06:49:34 [hometext] => umm idk whats the inspiration behind it was like my mind was else where but my fingerswere still moving :) [bodytext] =>
...and i'll stick with you
the binds that hold
my life's glue
and it dosen't even matter
that your right here
reading this
as i'm typing this
hanging on to every word
like its gonna fall of the page
or screen...
it so wonderful
and a tad bit nostalgic
to want somethihng i already
HAD.
past tense my friend
you left five hours ago
about the same time
when my ink ran out on me tho.
and my pig tail braids
want to fly out of me too.
bringing back memories
and i'll never forget
the stress
the anxioty
i probably didnt spell it right
but you can't correct it
you probably forgot i was here
still typin word after word
and it barley makes sense
sitting so still
so belivable
like a false pretense
i guess....
but all i can ask for
is that you
stick to me
and i'll stick with you
behind close doors
noone has to know
we'll stare upwards
never saying a word
but communicating through
the clouds that can be
seen through our transparent
celing.
but i guess we cant..
cause you left five hours ago
too soon for my taste
but what do i know
i'm only a dreamer
or so they tell
and i cant do much to
call you back
so just
stick to me
and i'll stick with you
when i can. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Simply_Colorful [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Stick to me

Contributed by Simply_Colorful on Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 06:49:34 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



...and i'll stick with you
the binds that hold
my life's glue
and it dosen't even matter
that your right here
reading this
as i'm typing this
hanging on to every word
like its gonna fall of the page
or screen...
it so wonderful
and a tad bit nostalgic
to want somethihng i already
HAD.
past tense my friend
you left five hours ago
about the same time
when my ink ran out on me tho.
and my pig tail braids
want to fly out of me too.
bringing back memories
and i'll never forget
the stress
the anxioty
i probably didnt spell it right
but you can't correct it
you probably forgot i was here
still typin word after word
and it barley makes sense
sitting so still
so belivable
like a false pretense
i guess....
but all i can ask for
is that you
stick to me
and i'll stick with you
behind close doors
noone has to know
we'll stare upwards
never saying a word
but communicating through
the clouds that can be
seen through our transparent
celing.
but i guess we cant..
cause you left five hours ago
too soon for my taste
but what do i know
i'm only a dreamer
or so they tell
and i cant do much to
call you back
so just
stick to me
and i'll stick with you
when i can.




Copyright © Simply_Colorful ... [ 2007-08-26 06:49:34]
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Re: Stick to me (User Rating: 1 )
by thebrokenyouth on Sunday, 26th August 2007 @ 07:13:51 AM AEST
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again, this is another i had to read more than once.
good use of the extended metaphor you used through out the poem. kind of reminded me of free verse but this was formatted differently. i understand though......
good work.
great writing.

remy




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