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Array ( [sid] => 136944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Break up [time] => 2007-08-24 10:44:54 [hometext] => the feelings that i'm gonna get really soon [bodytext] => I've been hurt before
But this pain hurts so much more
The pain I've tried to hide
To preserve my pathetic pride

Rejection hurts so bad
That pain made me mad
I thought I had lost this pain
But I have so much more to gain

The pain hurts so much worse
That makes life feel like a curse

Loving you and still so sad
Afraid I'll never again be glad
Depression helped me in the past
But I don't want this new feeling to last

This feeling is completely new
But resembles much that I've been through
I've been hiding my pain because of how much you've been dealt
Despite my futile efforts your same feeling, still felt

You've looked to others for new love
Guess I'm not that "Angel" from above

Despite all this I want to be with you forever
And not worry about this ever
I'll love you more than you'll ever know



The sad part is, it continues to grow
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Amicus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Break up

Contributed by Amicus on Friday, 24th August 2007 @ 10:44:54 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I've been hurt before
But this pain hurts so much more
The pain I've tried to hide
To preserve my pathetic pride

Rejection hurts so bad
That pain made me mad
I thought I had lost this pain
But I have so much more to gain

The pain hurts so much worse
That makes life feel like a curse

Loving you and still so sad
Afraid I'll never again be glad
Depression helped me in the past
But I don't want this new feeling to last

This feeling is completely new
But resembles much that I've been through
I've been hiding my pain because of how much you've been dealt
Despite my futile efforts your same feeling, still felt

You've looked to others for new love
Guess I'm not that "Angel" from above

Despite all this I want to be with you forever
And not worry about this ever
I'll love you more than you'll ever know



The sad part is, it continues to grow




Copyright © Amicus ... [ 2007-08-24 10:44:54]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Break up (User Rating: 1 )
by OneLastTime on Friday, 31st August 2007 @ 07:35:53 PM AEST
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very emotional poem!..
very sad poem:(




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