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Array ( [sid] => 136927 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Stupid Girl [time] => 2007-08-23 13:22:17 [hometext] => I wrote this the other day to get out some of my frustration =] [bodytext] => You stupid girl, when will you realize it was all for nothing?

You stupid girl, how could you be so blind?

"hold me in your heart forever" are meaningless when the

one you love turns their back on you.

I'll push you away into my darkest memories.

You stupid girl, love only happens in fairytales.

I'll let the days slip away, let you pass by me, and spiral into the nothingness that is now my heart.

If only you'd hold me again, and take all my pain away.

You stupid girl, so twisted up inside, when will you learn there's not such thing as a happy ending?

Please, leave me, this stupid girl, leave her wondering how her heart could break so easily.

Leave her looking in the mirror every day, hating herself in every breath she takes.

You stupid girl, will you ever learn that moments are fleeting?

Watch me now, watch me mess up everything.

Everything's all wrong you stupid girl, how could you not see it coming?

My hands reach for you, your heart rejects me.

Stop wasting time on wishes that will never come true.

Just try to walk away now, you stupid girl, the road you take isn't going anywhere.

Your confusion wraps around you like a noose, and who will save you?

You stupid girl, you know you're all wrong.

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You Stupid Girl

Contributed by redhead91 on Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 01:22:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



You stupid girl, when will you realize it was all for nothing?

You stupid girl, how could you be so blind?

"hold me in your heart forever" are meaningless when the

one you love turns their back on you.

I'll push you away into my darkest memories.

You stupid girl, love only happens in fairytales.

I'll let the days slip away, let you pass by me, and spiral into the nothingness that is now my heart.

If only you'd hold me again, and take all my pain away.

You stupid girl, so twisted up inside, when will you learn there's not such thing as a happy ending?

Please, leave me, this stupid girl, leave her wondering how her heart could break so easily.

Leave her looking in the mirror every day, hating herself in every breath she takes.

You stupid girl, will you ever learn that moments are fleeting?

Watch me now, watch me mess up everything.

Everything's all wrong you stupid girl, how could you not see it coming?

My hands reach for you, your heart rejects me.

Stop wasting time on wishes that will never come true.

Just try to walk away now, you stupid girl, the road you take isn't going anywhere.

Your confusion wraps around you like a noose, and who will save you?

You stupid girl, you know you're all wrong.





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Re: You Stupid Girl (User Rating: 1 )
by zenith66 on Thursday, 23rd August 2007 @ 04:12:28 PM AEST
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hey, thought this was a brilliant write, i really got thrown in there...
made me remember one of my darkest memories, thanks for this piece.

well done!!!

zenith66




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