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Some ruminations while staring into my cereal
Contributed by
zicky
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Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 10:06:42 PM in AEST
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In this veil of tears,
Man has but to open his eyes,
Well,Then he would be judged mad of course.
Not immediatly,
Maybe,
But over a number years.
Chipped away at.
Or maybe he would be just that
startelled by a vision too beautiful.
threatening self-harm
Carried off to a funny farm
There,supervised, to gather his blindness from with-in.
Copyright ©
zicky
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2007-08-21 22:06:42] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Some ruminations while staring into my cereal
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 22nd August 2007 @ 12:29:18 AM AEST (User
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Your poem paints a very dismal picture bern. |
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