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The Cure
Contributed by
xxx_lover
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Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 07:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Too many quiet nights
brought to life with crimson regrets,
Too many silent fights
fought while not giving my best.
Far too many nightmares,
jerked back to cruel reality.
Too many times I should have cared
never a time when I was dared.
My pain always willing,
those habits were killing.
Too many cuts reopened,
never healing, always hurting.
Way too many bruises
not one from me, always willing.
To many psych visits
the last ending in perscription.
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xxx_lover
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2007-08-21 07:51:11] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Cure
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 21st August 2007 @ 12:13:05 PM AEST (User
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The ending was pretty good, and the imagery was consistent throughout and it conveyed your emotions well, I think. Nice job. |
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